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The most superb ending for an action Novel.

Posted: Nov 27, 2003 Thu 04:38 pm     Views: 61   

FIN

I went for it and I fell for it.The bullet penetrated my body ,piercing the warm flesh making its way through like a bullet train in a tunnel.My eyes gaveup to see anymore,i lost my balance and was on the ground.I was stunned by the unbearable pain and the horrors of the past started flashing like a reel in my mind.Wasp came over me and said,"Its over Ali".I heard him and tried to understand him but the pain beacame a medium of interference between us.He said"Ali you have been an annoying son of a bitch and now its your turn to accept the bitter taste of defeat",he aimed his 9mm pistol at me and said"Goodbye Ali ,see you in hell",and then everything took the shape of a slowmotion movie ,i watched him aiming the gun at me and from nowhere i felt the long gone spark of revenge inside me.I with my last ounce of energy pulled out my gun and fired.It was a bullseye."Maju" nicknamed as "Wasp" struggled to hold his strength but it was pouring down from the hole in his head in the form of blood and he fell.I with the help of my hands moved towards him slowly .Weakness was grasping my body and i struggled to wither away unconsiousness but it was of no use.I heard the distant sound of sirens.I thought for the first time in so many years "I really didn’t wanted to die".I examined the pistol and there was only one bullet left.I looked at maju and opened his mouth."He deserve this i thought",i inserted the mouth of my revolver in his mouth.Maju moved a little.He was too much stubborn to die.I moved close towards his ear and said"Hell isn’t big enough for both of us".I pressed the trigger and the bullet found its way through his head to the ground.The last bullet was an exclamation mark to everything that has led to this point.
It is over now!!!.I finally loosen my finger from the trigger.


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