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Whichever a shackle!

Posted: Apr 11, 2008 Fri 01:08 am     Views: 193    Interacts: 9

Koi Zanjeer ho!
By Amjad Islam Amjad

Translation : Aadil Omer



Whichever a shackle!
Whatever a chain!
Of steel, of silver,
even of convention,
love can break it!

Tis a shield,
that can't be crossed,
by any of the swords of time.

Tis a city,
that neither a king,
nor a dictator can rule!

This is a mirror,
that cannot reflect an image,
gazed upon with an impure eye.

Tis a fire,
where souls smile,
even if bodies,
are entangled by flames.

Tis a flood,
that is willingly invited,
by the towns of hearts.

Dreams turn into realities.
The extinguished scenes,
become resplendent.
An unheard prayer,
all of a sudden,
bears fruits,
and a strayed fortune
asking for direction,
is found right in front,
When it so wishes.

A running tide of time,
a dying flickr,
the metaphor of nothingness,
and a broken falling star,
can only be stopped by love.

It can mend pieces,
of a shattered mirror,
and it can twist the reins,
of weathers,
where it so wishes.
Whatever a shackle!
Whichever a chain!
Love can break it!








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Latest comments
Posted by Mushtaqji on Friday April 11, 2008 03:08 am
Dear Aadil,
This is Great
Please carry on.
Have a nice life

Mushtaq Hussain
Posted by shobig_sifar on Friday April 11, 2008 03:06 am
lol Nadeen. the barishes have baras chukeeN just short of a gazillion times already (no more a case of baras 'raheeN' or I would have acted upon your advice). The sky's clear now and I spend my days gazing at the sky and end up with plenty of crows' droppings on my specs...and my nights counting the stars and drawing blue whales and what not using them, just as the little girl in the airtel (?) ad... :D
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 11, 2008 02:25 am
Wow! nadeen, kya kehnay!
mufeed mashwara in a poetic way ....
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Friday April 11, 2008 02:16 am
woh teray naseeb ki baarishain kaheen aur kyoun thein baras rahein?
yeh mobile utha, ussay call kar, naa tu moun banaa, aiy sifaar jaa.

(adding an extra a to Sifar to keep right weight of poem)
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Friday April 11, 2008 02:11 am
An unheard prayer,
all of A sudden,
bears fruits,

you should add an A here.
You have a very good sense of words in the English language.

Its very good.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 11, 2008 01:40 am
TY ayesha!
woh teray naseeb ki baarishain kisi aur chath pey baras gayee'n,
meri baat sun, dil-e-bey-khabar usay bhool jaa, usay bhool ja!


Shobig! you've got this immaculate ability to bring fun out of nothing! keep us smiling! and you too!..lol
Posted by shobig_sifar on Friday April 11, 2008 01:24 am
aha...that's another verse I (am made to) repeat (to myself)quite often... wo teray naseeb ki baarishaiN kisi aur chhatt pe baras gaeeN :(
Posted by ayesha5 on Friday April 11, 2008 01:21 am
What is that couplet woh meray naseeb ki barishain...?
You are goot at translation! :-)
Posted by shobig_sifar on Friday April 11, 2008 01:20 am
AIA rocks!

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