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Three Children

Posted: Apr 14, 2008 Mon 07:58 am     Views: 241    Interacts: 3

Early in the morning with blurred looks,
The only clothes,the hardships and fate
In Sahara, where an ocean meets the desert
Sit three with wooden tablets and verses of Quran
Not much to lose, but enough to learn

As this ice melts when viewed from a distance
The only conversation is the old expression
Of wonder and resolve, as faces emerge
One day we will travel far,
From what we have learnt and seen
See you will not us but only the wall
The old protection, the only support

Travel far to this place, only in existence
What a pain this old desire to learn and to give
Far from our village as we make our way
From routines to remember to the needs of hunger
Work now resumes and different tools
The old skies and African deserts

Sit there these three children
With morning friendship and long references
In African sky and with verses of Quran!

Kashkin


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Posted by kashkin on Tuesday April 15, 2008 04:57 am
Thanks Aadil and Nadeen for your comments, my fellow inhabitants of words....
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Monday April 14, 2008 07:58 pm
What I like about your poems is that it gives our imagination a flight to the lands that we've never seen but which become familiar as if we are somewhere there.
It is a fact that one clings to the faith when everything is falling apart and adverse conditions make one seek divine help. So are these children seeking the help of Almighty when neglected by us; the humans. We ought to give a stirr to our slumbering concience.

Go well!
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Monday April 14, 2008 01:15 pm
They say the less you have, the closer it draws you to faith and religion. Religion becomes a life line for survival.
I like the part where they are reading the Quran. Mashaallah.
In a simple life lies peace and serenity despite the physical disadvantages.

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