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Recently by kashkin
Immersed in deliberations
Of all those moments we cannot see
What lies beyond, all we see is fiction
Of our shortcomings, of our failures
Issues we cannot resolve, we blame
On someone else, not our burden,
Incapable, barren like the land
From years of wasteful efforts
Find them we all everywhere
In streets, these signatures of their crime
Immersed in deliberation, the old plots
To reincarnate the old effects,
Fools we are, as we expect goodness
From politicians of our times!
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Posted by kashkin on
Wednesday April 30, 2008 10:51 am
Sir Shobig_Sifar,
valid concerns I must say and quite rightly pointed out..I dont know why I wrote that poem in this manner, I guess to reflect the political situation and players who have different concepts what is expected of them..Hence the reason the poem looks like a prose and the prose a poem....
But the next poem " Redemption" takes care of this concept of prose and rhymes....
Rgds
Kashkin
valid concerns I must say and quite rightly pointed out..I dont know why I wrote that poem in this manner, I guess to reflect the political situation and players who have different concepts what is expected of them..Hence the reason the poem looks like a prose and the prose a poem....
But the next poem " Redemption" takes care of this concept of prose and rhymes....
Rgds
Kashkin
Posted by shobig_sifar on
Wednesday April 30, 2008 01:35 am
kahkin yaar, no offense but you are not doing poetic justice to your own work anymore, i mean it looks more like prose. Consider lyric-izing it and make the verses rhyme a bit more, please. Have really liked most of your previous works, count me in as a fan.
Posted by Macbeth on
Tuesday April 29, 2008 07:01 pm
yes we wil be nothing but fools as long we choose to sit and expect...we need to Do something abt it.
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