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In connection with the First May

Posted: Apr 29, 2008 Tue 10:41 pm     Views: 125    Interacts: 6

Original In Pushto by Sardar Yousafzai
Translated by Aadil Omer

"The Young Pushtun Laborers"



Tired in search of work,
they are consumed by pleads and requests,
How would they enjoy their life!
Our youth are devoured by labor

Together they decide to go to Attock
For the harvest of peanuts crop,
Someone favors Kashmir to reap grasses,
In its cooler weathers,
Another wants them to go to Mansehra
For the tobacco burners
And they are ready to leave their homes

With a pair of clothes in a polythene bag
They are consumed by worries of work and wealth,
How would they enjoy their life!
Our youngsters are devoured by labor

Some leave for Attock, some for Kashmir
While others march the roads of Pindi,
I myself have seen them flooding
The squares of all the bigger cities
In Mansehra , they fill and ignite
Their contracted burners,
With sweaty bodies and filthy clothes;
They keep long vigils

Their beautiful faces; their rosy cheeks
Are consumed by the smoky dust of time
How would they enjoy their life!
Our youngsters are devoured by labor

Unquenched in Lahore or Pindi
Most of them leave for karachi
Starting from Sohrab Goth
They wander across every populous place,
If lucky; they are gate keepers in a factory,
If not; they struggle on desperately,
Hence tears my heart;
How long will they toil in misery

Crushed in the mill of haplessness
They are consumed by the unjust mill owner
How would they enjoy their life!
Our youth are devoured by labor.


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Posted by kaptain on Thursday May 1, 2008 02:15 am
A Pathan when gets educated does wonders warna blunders...
I don't want to flatter but majority of Pathans are against education.
Here in the Middle East, scant percentage of them is educated rest are a blotch on Pakistan's repute.

Step ahead to educate them and at least make them a grad.
Posted by kashkin on Wednesday April 30, 2008 10:47 am
Aadil
brilliant portryal of our fellow human beings and their struggles as these options of choice and there needs diminish with concept of existence.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday April 30, 2008 03:14 am
Thanx a lot ma'am! Thats what I needed; an editor's nod! but reality bites you know ... am not that lucky or say able to be published too often ... I want to be ... though!
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Wednesday April 30, 2008 02:50 am
Aadil Omer, you have the talent. Very well written.
Well Edited too. Well done. Get this published.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday April 30, 2008 02:07 am
The ongoing wheat and flour crises have increased the sufferings of the working classes. With about 66 percent of our population living below the poverty line; getting wages of less than 2 dollars per day, we've got issues of real concern regarding the survival of these masses. Immediate measures are required to contemplate on part of our government in order to stop our poor classes drift towards the jaws of death from malnutrition and hunger.

Thanks ayesha!
Posted by ayesha5 on Wednesday April 30, 2008 01:39 am
That is very nice work! I am thinking what will happen to these labors with increasing inflation? Times are hard for everyone.

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