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Recently by Optimistic_Aadil
I wish!
I wish I had
a wider area
inside my chest, where
all my contrasting thoughts,
young and matured,
shy and assured
and fair and dark,
could peacefully coexist,
without encroaching upon,
each others territory.
The heart's too tiny a place
not to suffocate
when they are intermingled.
I wish there were
more breathing spaces.
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Posted by augmentin on
Wednesday June 18, 2008 04:47 am
Good poem.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Sunday June 8, 2008 08:09 pm
Thanx quin for drawing such a similarity ... it was a multitude of thoughts that stimulated me to write the poem ...
Posted by quin on
Saturday June 7, 2008 07:00 am
This is coincidental that I am just reading an article by Erwin Schroedinger, a great physicist, expressing similar idea in his concept of paradox of arithmetic - "there appears to be a great multitude of conscious egos, the world, however is only ONE."
Your poem is wonderful ... great multitude - seeking the ONE
Your poem is wonderful ... great multitude - seeking the ONE
Posted by goonga on
Saturday June 7, 2008 05:07 am
:)
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Friday June 6, 2008 07:48 pm
Thank you all buddies!
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on
Friday June 6, 2008 05:58 pm
Interesting - your way with words is very cool!
Posted by ayesha5 on
Friday June 6, 2008 05:21 am
That's a good stuff! :-)
Posted by Delirium on
Thursday June 5, 2008 11:04 pm
Lovely
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Thursday June 5, 2008 10:38 pm
thank you
Posted by marryam on
Thursday June 5, 2008 08:47 pm
nice
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