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The heart craves while the mind's dead

Posted: Jun 16, 2008 Mon 10:02 pm Views: 272 Interacts: 12

The memory lane of my mind,

with all the extensions to eternity

is blocked by a variety of reasons,

and the gloom rules in its entirety.

Caught in the abyss, I grope for a clue

which could lead me at least to a glimpse;

a slightest of your smiles that you so lavishly

gave, or any of your tears; the little jewels

that I used to collect in my palm.

My woes it seems are willfully increased

by a contemptuous Fate, when it decided

to leave my heart untamed.

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Posted by kashkin on Thursday June 19, 2008 05:47 pm

beautiful poem Aadil,

"My woes it seems are willfully increased

by a contemptuous Fate, when it decided

to leave my heart untamed. "

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Tuesday June 17, 2008 08:11 pm

Its not wierd at all goonga ... and I know you know quite much than you pretend ... lol ...

Thanx alot quin! your thoughts are much appreciated :-)

Thank you hitman!

Posted by hitman on Tuesday June 17, 2008 07:28 pm

Aadil sb., you write very well.

Posted by quin on Tuesday June 17, 2008 06:04 am

Beautiful and intricate ... well done embroidery of thought and feelings ... (mind and heart both alive and kicking)

Posted by goonga on Tuesday June 17, 2008 04:40 am

was I that weird in the past?
you were not weird mango! rest assured.
but tell me if it is weird to be unbeknownst to english poetry?

Posted by shobig_sifar on Tuesday June 17, 2008 03:24 am

ditto Ayesha! :(

this goes to show ke aap kay aur humaray khayalaat kitnay miltay jultay heiN (I guess I don't need to mention the blush anymore). :P

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Tuesday June 17, 2008 02:35 am

Thanx ayesha ... I wish I were endowed with a lively combination of both ...

Thanx a lot goonga ... I can sigh a relief courtesy your comments ... was I that wierd in the past? .. lol ..

Posted by goonga on Tuesday June 17, 2008 01:39 am

kia baat hey shah jee!
btw ab mughey bi thori thori samagh ana shru ho gai hey...shru sey aakhir tak aik rabt hey iss main, aur khiyaal tou buhat hi zabardast hey.

Posted by ayesha5 on Tuesday June 17, 2008 01:38 am

Nice!
Here the heart is dead while the mind craves... (or is active) :-)

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Tuesday June 17, 2008 01:31 am

Thanx ahmadi!

I'm happy that you've liked the peom especially its ending. The idea's new to me as well. Let's ponder it.
Thanx for your comment.

Posted by shobig_sifar on Tuesday June 17, 2008 12:26 am

Awesome. I haven't come across the idea of fate taming one's heart before, so guess I'll need to mull over it a bit before I can actually grasp it. The Idea's a new one (at least to me) and the ending of this poem's a fine one. :)

Keep them coming.

Posted by Ahmadi_Mureed on Tuesday June 17, 2008 12:02 am

Your poetry is deep , meaningful and beautiful

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