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Recently by Optimistic_Aadil
To my unseen
Up above in ether
a star winked at
a star, and a divine
stroke completed the
loveliest of pictures
in my heart.
A miraculous midnight sun
shone, whenever it was
gloomy inside.
I boasted of holding
a treasure in my chest,
but the world required
logic, and you didn't show
to prove them wrong.
My hands complained me too
for not entwining them with
yours, and my eyes tried to
melt me into bringing them
a glimpse of your real sight.
Just come out of it,
or I'll have to try
and slash my heart for that.
They will love us,
roaming the universe
up to the ether.
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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Tuesday June 24, 2008 03:42 am
Thanx ayesha
Posted by ayesha5 on
Tuesday June 24, 2008 02:58 am
"A star winked at a star"
That's a beautiful expression.
That's a beautiful expression.
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on
Monday June 23, 2008 11:48 pm
Hey Aadil - check the poem I posted today - in the chowk ilogs - aadmi se darti houn - You are writing about "before" of marriage - I just threw light on the "after" situation!
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