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Feeling envious

Posted: Jul 8, 2008 Tue 11:48 pm     Views: 276    Interacts: 9

I look at the lush

Margalla hills with its

tips rendered invisible

by the possessive clouds,

and I'm feeling begrudged by the

chaddar covering your

face; it fears I would

steal a glimpse

of you.


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Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Thursday July 10, 2008 08:37 am
Interesting - real life mein aap ki ammi se baat karni padhay gee - as soon as we locate on google earth up close and personal - the American version - on where the Chaddar waali Lady lives.Must ask BMK for directions - ;)

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday July 9, 2008 10:39 pm
Thanks both you guys, ayesha and kashkin!
Posted by kashkin on Wednesday July 9, 2008 08:45 am
nice one aadil..
beautiful parallelism...as quin highlighted it already

good work...
Posted by ayesha5 on Wednesday July 9, 2008 07:01 am
Possessive clouds! Wonderful! :-)
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday July 9, 2008 03:52 am
Thank you Quin! It has been edited in line with shobig's big question mark ... hah..
Posted by quin on Wednesday July 9, 2008 03:35 am
good parallelism!
you still may mean envy - as chader is having more fun than you ... there was a line I was trying to recall - hum se achha hay (something) which is touching / seeing you !!! was an Urdu song or shair - can't recall
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday July 9, 2008 01:15 am
yep shobig ... thats what I mean ...

install tau may karloonga lakin real life may sirf tasweero'n say tau apnay aap ko nahi behlaya ja sakta ... lol ...
Posted by bmk on Wednesday July 9, 2008 12:48 am
google-earth install karo opti_man...
Posted by shobig_sifar on Wednesday July 9, 2008 12:24 am
Envy? I guess you mean begrudge/resent?

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