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An encounter!

Posted: Jul 23, 2008 Wed 02:43 am     Views: 144    Interacts: 4

Last night I saw a full moon
embellished in the jewelery of gold,
upfront in a backdrop; black,
as it poured its beams
which it deemed right
to negate the dark.

Intent on hiding the truth
an evil cloud threw a curtain
of gloom over the face of the moon.

It wasn't yet doom
as I could see some resolute
silvery patches resurfacing
the murky scene
every now and then,
before burying deep by the
vastly obscure skies.

The clouds laughed a malicious thunder,
while someone shed tears of sympathy.


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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday July 25, 2008 10:50 pm
So very thanx Quin!
Posted by quin on Wednesday July 23, 2008 08:29 am
good personification - poet, u r good at this
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday July 23, 2008 05:39 am
Thanx kaptain! :-)
Posted by kaptain on Wednesday July 23, 2008 03:00 am
The clouds laughed a malicious thunder,
while someone shed tears of sympathy.


the gist..
good one there..

deep and reminds of deserts..and lonely nights..


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