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Mujhe Apny Zabt Pey Naz Tha, Sar-E-Bazam Raat Ye Kia Hoa~

Posted: Sep 26, 2008 Fri 11:54 pm     Views: 431    Interacts: 7

Mujhe Apny Zabt Pey Naz Tha, Sar-E-Bazam Raat Ye Kia Hoa~
~Mery Ankh Keyse Chalakh Pari, Mujhe Ranj Hai Ye Bora Hoa~

~Mery Zindagi Key Charagh Ka, Ye Mizaj Koi Nahi Naya~
~Kabhi Roshni Kabhi Tergi, Na Jala Hoa Na Bujha Hoa~

~Mujhey Aap Kioun Na Samjh Saky, Ye Apny Dil Sey He Pocheye~
~Mery Dastan-E-Heyat Ka, Hai Warq Warq Khula Hoa~


~Abhi Abhi Mery Pass Sey, Jo Nazar Bacha Key Guzerh Gaye~
~Ye Mery Seher Key Loog Hain, Mery Ghar Sey Ghar Mila Hoa~


~Mujhe Jo Bhi Dushman-E-Jan Mila,Wohi Pukhta Kar-E-Jafa Mila~
~Na Kisi Ke Chot Ghalat Pari, Na Kisi Ka War Kahta Hoa~


~Mujhe Ham Safar Bhi Mila Koi, Tu Mery Tarha He Luta Hoa~
~Kabhi Manziloon Se Hata Hoa, Kabhi Qafiloon Sey Luta Hoa~

~Mujhey Ik Gali Men Para Hoa, Kisi Bad Naseeb Ka Khath Mila~
~Kaheen Khoon-E-Dil Sey Likha Hoa, Kaheen Ansoon Sey Mita Hoa~


~Hameen To Ye Bhi Haq Nahi, Ke Shareq Bazam Kohlos Hon~
~Na Cehry Pey Apny Naqab Hai, Na Kuch Asteen Men Chupha Hoa~


~Hameen Apny Gharh Sey Chaly Hoye, Sar Rah Umer Guzerr Gaye~
~Na Safar Ka Haq Ada Hoa, Na Justajo Ka Sila Mila~


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Latest comments
Posted by kaptain on Sunday September 28, 2008 02:50 am
I'm not the author..
I'm just a copier..
Posted by Ravi_Kopra on Saturday September 27, 2008 10:09 pm
a ghazal of utter ruins, sadness, helplessness...
I would love to translate it into English if you could define some difficult words for me. Let me know.

I presume you are the author. Right?
Posted by viqarm on Saturday September 27, 2008 04:36 pm
I visited the link below, and it shows the last verse a little different than posted here:

humain apney ghar sey chaley howe, sar-e raah um'r guzar gaii
koi justuju ka sila mila, na safar ka huq hi ada howa

The link:

http://tinyurl.com/3qx76v
Posted by MeiraJ08 on Saturday September 27, 2008 03:06 pm
I really liked this kaptain, and i think the 'vazan' of your lines is much better than Mr. Viqarm's.
Posted by Izzah on Saturday September 27, 2008 09:08 am
Superb !!
Posted by marryam on Saturday September 27, 2008 03:05 am
beautiful!
Posted by viqarm on Saturday September 27, 2008 12:32 am
The second line in the last verse sounds out of kilter and out of balance. It would rhyme, and balance, a lot better with the other verses if it was, instead:

Hameen Apny Gharh Sey Chaly Hoye, Sar Rah Umer Guzerr Gaye
Na(tau) Justajo Ka Sila Mila, Na Safar Ka Haq (hi) Ada Hoa

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