Hijrat
Tahir Ali April 16, 2006
#1 Posted by teshah on April 17, 2006 5:54:18 pm
A good attempt, especially this `quadruplet`:
``Kuch ko raas ayee bay wafai hay
Kuchh nay apnoon say chot khai hay
jis nay apna zameer baich diya
us ki kismat main shehan shahi hay``
Keep it up dear.
``Kuch ko raas ayee bay wafai hay
Kuchh nay apnoon say chot khai hay
jis nay apna zameer baich diya
us ki kismat main shehan shahi hay``
Keep it up dear.
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#2 Posted by Urstruly on April 18, 2006 7:17:13 am
Bohat Zabardast, Tahir Ali Sahib.
I especially liked this one:
``Thay watan main bhi bay watan hum log
lakh kartay koi jatan hum log
gar ghulami pay chekhtay ziada
murda sartay thay bay kafan hum log``
Very Habib Jalibish slash Faizish.
Keep writing.
#3 Posted by limner on July 9, 2006 4:31:38 am
Re: # 2: Thanks my dear for ur kind review and ur comments.
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