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i want life

nafisa tadvi April 7, 2006

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#1 Posted by Inquirer on April 13, 2006 7:04:42 am
An attempt below to repackage and represent the nice poem. Some times the breaks and format of idea packaging lets the reader enjoy it more, though for the dying poet a jumble of ideas is more natural.


i am dying slowly.

i look above,
god is looking and laughing.

he made the most beautiful world
which turned out ugly for me
i want this world back please
i pray to you god , i plead.

i know i walked the wrong way
and now i am standing at bay
the moment i leap i`ll fall
and that will be the end of all.

but hope still prevails in my heart
i know miracles made u god
i close my eyes and i give u my hand
and i know you`ll take me to the right land.
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