A Last Poem for London
Murtaza Shibli May 27, 2006
#2 Posted by guarana on July 9, 2006 8:40:04 pm
Emotions, vibrant with shock and fear, come through quite clearly even though the lines are very verbose right through. Maybe a little bit of paring down and tightening up would have raised this poem from quite good to excellent? Good job; keep writing...look forward to reading more from you.
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