Shashi Gupta June 27, 2006
#3 Posted by farrukhkamrani on July 1, 2006 11:08:26 pm
Dear Gupta,
The sense that I had after reading the story was that of incompletion. I can see that you have the makings of a good writer... but still the ideas seem to need a bit more baking in the kiln of heart and mind. The major problem of the story is that in it `Salman` and `Suleman` have still not become complete symbols. You have however a depth of feeling and sincerety which are charateristic only of artists.
The sense that I had after reading the story was that of incompletion. I can see that you have the makings of a good writer... but still the ideas seem to need a bit more baking in the kiln of heart and mind. The major problem of the story is that in it `Salman` and `Suleman` have still not become complete symbols. You have however a depth of feeling and sincerety which are charateristic only of artists.
#2 Posted by farrukhkamrani on July 1, 2006 11:07:07 pm
Dear Gupta,
The sense that I had after reading the story was that of incompletion. I can see that you have the makings of a good writer... but still the ideas seem to need a bit more baking in the kiln of heart and mind. The major problem of the story is that in it `Salman` and `Suleman` have still not become complete symbols. You have however a depth of feeling and sincerety which are charateristic only of artists.
The sense that I had after reading the story was that of incompletion. I can see that you have the makings of a good writer... but still the ideas seem to need a bit more baking in the kiln of heart and mind. The major problem of the story is that in it `Salman` and `Suleman` have still not become complete symbols. You have however a depth of feeling and sincerety which are charateristic only of artists.
#1 Posted by bjk on June 30, 2006 8:01:11 am
I knew it. It was all Salman Khan`s fault!
He deserved what he got! A mouthful of tea!
But what did I do to deserve this write-up?
Wait - I don`t want to know!
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