Socialist Yuppies 2: Hanging Crowd

Didn`t quite make it this time.

Khassi and Khabees should have worked before bringing it to this insignificant close.

Unlike the first part.

``Khabees: Hain? Kiss kay joints??

Khasi: DAMN! Khabees, whats wrong with you? The charas wali K-2 you dumb f***.``

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Amazing! Adam Khan strikes the jackpot once again. Hope you give us the third part too!

``Adam`` you`re probably the best writer on Chowk, this was amazing. Oh and before I forget, I like you`re TV show ;)

its realy great to read such a wonderful story. adam you have got really good expression skills. waiting for next part. which one is your tv show and on which channel is it telecasted.

Yaar Adam,

Excellent story. Loved it from start till the end. Keep it up! You`ve got great talent.

Pretty plain and superficial stuff.

Part#1 was cool and it showed semaphoring and the unconditional attitude of the peshawari brats...however there is a natural transitional effects on peshawaris who are routely coupled with islamabad and feel a broad line of exposed harmonal society in the capital `the drug larvas`...Amusing the change the pathan are going through in sarhad areas where white lillies love to dress boldly and funky naswar chewing reluctant urdu speaker guys cum bairas sinking to lowest levels to appear moderns...the white powder is emerging and the smoke is appealing as not before... But still the girls have some sharam left and wear burqas over their t-shirts, dont swim with their brother`s friends, dont sheesha much, and donot dance infront of their ba-ghairat brothers.

anyways, would like to read more of the endeavors of their minds !

Hey guys, thanks for all the praise as well as the criticism.

CheGuevara: I dont have a tv show, this is not my real name. Adam Khan is a legendary pushto folk character. The story ``Adam khan aao Durkhanai`` is the pushto equivalent of ``Heer Ranjha``.

I havent read part 1 but this was hilarious. I could almost visualize the characters.

I will be in Peshawar later this year Insha Allah.....dont tell me there will be no dancing and dhoom dhurruka...
and believe me I dont count Havaai firing fun !

will read part 1 definitely !

Brilliant Adam ,
You are very promising; I can see sparkles of brilliants in you. I am from kerala, south of India, your characters are real and with little bit of cosmetic touch up, can be from any where in the sub continent and not just NWFP. Make sure you keep portraying them honestly but without reinforcing prejudices and stereotypes. I am impressed by your style of narration. Its time you start working on a full length novel .all the best.

Brilliant Adam ,
You are very promising; I can see sparkles of brilliants in you. I am from kerala, south of India, your characters are real and with little bit of cosmetic touch up, can be from any where in the sub continent and not just NWFP. Make sure you keep portraying them honestly but without reinforcing prejudices and stereotypes. I am impressed by your style of narration. Its time you start working on a full length novel .all the best.

Ooooops, Sorry folks. for the repeated post, not intentional,

althaf51:
its okay althaf bhai and thanks a lot for the encouragement.

Rakaposh:
In Peshawar there is a ban on playing music in public, as well as on havai firing. Peshawaris are simply fun starved these days...

What a style of describing the small little things you`ve got! It`s really amazing to know that we`ve got talented writers like you.....der kha....keep up the good work .... zama zrha de khushala ku......

I do not understand how yall are admiring the story. It aint a story nor it`s cute --Just a couple of facts put together for Peshawari life v. ISB life.

Let`s think outside the box. Let fiminism roar in those clubs that YES THERE SHULD BE MUSICnDANCE and YES THERE MUST BE MULLAS. If either one is missing then the difinition for the other vanishes. You pick what to do; grow your beard or your head-hair.

u were able to fictionalize a huge flaw in the people quite successfully...gud work chap.