Clytan Fernando October 24, 2006
#5 Posted by zainabsiddique on November 7, 2006 4:46:29 pm
nice first attempt!keep it up! We would really love to read your short stories as well!
#4 Posted by bjkumar on October 30, 2006 10:20:58 am
Pay no attention – to the charade
Don’t let folks – rain on your parade
Let the doctor – frown and frown
Tell him – hey, you’re just a clown!
Ask the doctor – go jump in lake
All are quacks – are little but fake!
Throw away sheets – jump up and down
Go feel that rain – all over the town!
#2 Posted by shobig_sifar on October 25, 2006 3:25:37 pm
I was about to say it`s pretty juvenile when I read your introduction. Good enough or a maiden attempt, notwithstanding the age. And the 1000 word limit is pretty flexible I am sure, do please submit your short stories, there is an aweful dearth of such on this site!
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