Dessert
Sadia Rauf December 1, 2006
#19 Posted by MD-exclusive on July 22, 2007 11:20:43 pm
Re: # 8
Hey if you are man then what do you think of urself. and what do u think of women. it will b good for u to clear ur head and change ur opinion. Because in future u guys will be holded by women.
And as far the Sadia's Poem concerns It is Marvellous. it doesn't is, what it seems. For this kind of poems u have to use ur mind and insight, which mostly men don't have.
Sorry if my comment hurts u, but truth is TRUTH.
MD
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Poetess, writer and thinker
Hey if you are man then what do you think of urself. and what do u think of women. it will b good for u to clear ur head and change ur opinion. Because in future u guys will be holded by women.
And as far the Sadia's Poem concerns It is Marvellous. it doesn't is, what it seems. For this kind of poems u have to use ur mind and insight, which mostly men don't have.
Sorry if my comment hurts u, but truth is TRUTH.
MD
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Poetess, writer and thinker
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#17 Posted by PapuPanwari on April 2, 2007 1:10:25 am
bahi wah ....maza agaya
gogo pan masale ke kia baat !!!!
gogo pan masale ke kia baat !!!!
#13 Posted by Sahara on December 26, 2006 7:32:35 pm
I agree with #12. This one is kind of annoying and lacks depth.
#10 Posted by Minhaj on December 19, 2006 10:53:58 am
Each time you lie
You teach me how to see.
Yeh achee line thee. Maza aya parh ke. From your poetry it seems that you are married to the wrong person who is abusive and violent. If this is the case then take immediate action and start smiling again as you used to.
You teach me how to see.
Yeh achee line thee. Maza aya parh ke. From your poetry it seems that you are married to the wrong person who is abusive and violent. If this is the case then take immediate action and start smiling again as you used to.
#9 Posted by Azure on December 19, 2006 6:18:58 am
Re: # 8
I guess chowk staff have stopped reading the interacts.
I guess chowk staff have stopped reading the interacts.
#8 Posted by master_pak on December 16, 2006 7:27:53 pm
each time i spank you
you moan with pleasuer more
each time i slape you
you feel clarity more
each time command you
you serve me more
each time i behave firmly
you respect me more.
each time you see my manliness
you melt more.
each time i tell u to take my shoes
it turns you on more.
each time i give u pain
you feel pleasuer more
each time you disobey me
i punish you more
each time i punish you
you ask for more.
when u ask for more
i consider myself fool more.
womennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
what r uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.
what do you wantttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. ??????????????
plz tell us
you moan with pleasuer more
each time i slape you
you feel clarity more
each time command you
you serve me more
each time i behave firmly
you respect me more.
each time you see my manliness
you melt more.
each time i tell u to take my shoes
it turns you on more.
each time i give u pain
you feel pleasuer more
each time you disobey me
i punish you more
each time i punish you
you ask for more.
when u ask for more
i consider myself fool more.
womennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
what r uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.
what do you wantttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. ??????????????
plz tell us
#7 Posted by ELUSIVE on December 14, 2006 10:18:12 am
Loved it.
take out sharp red nails and scratch ...
bare fangs and drink the blood..
=)
take out sharp red nails and scratch ...
bare fangs and drink the blood..
=)
#5 Posted by rogues on December 9, 2006 3:56:33 pm
very nice, can be personal or political in nature but whatever might be the inspiration a good read.
#4 Posted by SaqlainKhwajha on December 7, 2006 8:13:38 am
Words of a toothless hag who has nothing but optimism left.
Hear that chowling hill wind, the purged fires of your ambition.
Though, Not sure who`s Rock who`s Paper (yr abridged vr); that shaves the thread.
Otherwise of course, your cooking is unlikely to be easily forgotten,
Stay warm, (with the cloying blood of your prey still steaming, still unwilling to soak into the sand under yer feet, i mean)
Hear that chowling hill wind, the purged fires of your ambition.
Though, Not sure who`s Rock who`s Paper (yr abridged vr); that shaves the thread.
Otherwise of course, your cooking is unlikely to be easily forgotten,
Stay warm, (with the cloying blood of your prey still steaming, still unwilling to soak into the sand under yer feet, i mean)
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