Baby Doll

A good read. 1 thing funny about this story is the stubburness of the child; I never remember myself resisting so much the pressure for being ``distinctive``. My words - its typical to Indo pak culture that parenrts supress their child`s youth in order to make him distinctive in sosiety. Well! for the rest of our life, we strive hard to be competitive, distinctive and compliant to social standards.

is this a joke or what??

``There`s something fucking creepy about this story.``(burpinder)

you can say that again...!

#4 yeah i see hints of sexual abuse.. its hard 2 believe the author is publishing his works in english

Mr.Ahuja..... Complaints about English are not reasonable, after 60 years I still have problemos , All pupils sholt know is not our mothertong. Some minds like me have some problemo with english and its grammer.

I`m having second thoughts now Mr. Ahuja. You really need to improve your writing style! Your stories are nice but they`re not written properly.

This seems more like notes scratched on a napkin for a story; in which case the bad grammar may be excused.

There`s something fucking creepy about this story. The bad grammar doesn`t help :(

Even if she gets into Harvard its no big deal or worth it......let her do naturally psychologist have been saying ....marks and scores are most misleading about future outcome just as past performanceis no guarantee of future earnings in MUTUAL FUNDS.....

You are going to be published in english? Amazing!

no no no