Dormant Embryo
Anum Ali June 13, 2007
#9 Posted by mangotree on January 19, 2008 8:36:29 am
I am not in favour of melancholy poetry but one thing - this piece was not gloomy, unlike most others. It was just a clever piece of thought. Good work.
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#6 Posted by ajanerashail on June 15, 2007 11:58:14 pm
Re: # 1
Thanks a million. There is nothing better in the world than a good comment on poetry that comes from such personal depths.
Thanks a million. There is nothing better in the world than a good comment on poetry that comes from such personal depths.
#5 Posted by ajanerashail on June 15, 2007 11:53:30 pm
Re: # 4
I do not know what made you feel the rhyming was planned because it just came to me naturally. Thanks for encouraging.
I do not know what made you feel the rhyming was planned because it just came to me naturally. Thanks for encouraging.
#4 Posted by scout_new on June 14, 2007 8:51:59 pm
in some parts, the rhyming seems contrived (screams/dreams, speak/weak, but overall, it`s a good piece, look forward to more from you
#3 Posted by Shah2 on June 13, 2007 1:35:03 pm
Lack of recognition is alienation
total denial of your existence
and that you matter
total denial of your existence
and that you matter
#2 Posted by subhashjoshi on June 13, 2007 8:53:55 am
Thoughtful words. Could have been composed better, but I liked it anyway.
#1 Posted by Urstruly on June 13, 2007 8:41:06 am
Excellent imagery and profound depth. Its been a while that I have seen such an exquisite work of art at chowk. The beauty of this poetry is that it is so simple yet it is so elegant.
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