He and She
Gomathy Subramanian July 19, 2007
#8 Posted by opalwaters on September 30, 2007 8:13:06 am
well written, but it leaves one horribly suspended. maybe the feeling was induced to run parallel with the tragic onslaught. nevertheless could have been a tad longer.
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#7 Posted by madmaheen on August 7, 2007 2:06:27 am
Beautifully written....
though I didnt really approve of such a tragic ending :(
мäħëêή
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though I didnt really approve of such a tragic ending :(
мäħëêή
=D
#6 Posted by ELUSIVE on July 28, 2007 7:12:58 am
i found it abrupt and the flow of writing very disjointed.
nice story but lacked the appropriate craftiness with words to make reading it more pleasurable.
nice story but lacked the appropriate craftiness with words to make reading it more pleasurable.
#4 Posted by Scribbler on July 26, 2007 4:25:06 am
Thanks guys.. hope to make it a lill longer next time :)
#3 Posted by aliG on July 25, 2007 7:58:49 pm
lol, i think you were just being lazy. But a good ending either way. I submitted something similar a week ago. lets hope it gets printed. :)
#2 Posted by antamazol on July 24, 2007 12:50:24 am
Gomathy,
Oh you cruel writer!
i was just enjoying romantic conversation, you just dropped it.Anyway Good one .keep it up but a bit longer next time.
Oh you cruel writer!
i was just enjoying romantic conversation, you just dropped it.Anyway Good one .keep it up but a bit longer next time.
#1 Posted by Azure on July 23, 2007 8:26:27 am
Uh... ok. Very sweet, but you could have written a little more!
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