The Seasons

Saeed Malik:

That's real good..WOW a whole story in rhyme.
ECHOBOOM.

Look me up in my profile. thanks.

Thanks! If only you had spelled my name correctly, I would have been somewhat confident that at least one reader was patient enough to finish my story, which my daughter considers oppressively long and boring.

Yes it is looooooooong! but I've read it completely and I appreciate your stamina and skill, Mr Saeed Malik, for composing such fascinating rhymical verses.

Aadil...

#2 Posted by saadmallik

My apologies saad..the interact page opens in a new window & somehow Saeed stayed in my mind.

These days one finds readership dwindling even for short stories written in prose, so I do not blame your daughters for being no different than any other children including mine.

keep writing.

This is wonderfully written and very rich like a dark chocolate cake.