The Dark Chocolate
Nikhat Rasool November 23, 2007
#1 Posted by rahul_capri on December 15, 2007 10:12:21 am
Nikhat, beautiful line this..
"The groove between bony shoulder blades at her back looked to be where her lost wings had been once attached."
Its vivid visuality just blew me away.
You got talent.Write more.
"The groove between bony shoulder blades at her back looked to be where her lost wings had been once attached."
Its vivid visuality just blew me away.
You got talent.Write more.
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#2 Posted by Nikhat on December 17, 2007 5:08:20 am
Thanks Sir I crave for encouragement. thanks a alot
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#3 Posted by rahul_capri on December 25, 2007 9:26:18 am
You re welcome.Please keep writing.The lack of interacts here is probably because of the length of the story.Don't mind it.
#4 Posted by Nikhat on December 25, 2007 11:26:24 pm
Re: # 3 aahaan!!!!!!!actually I write poetry alot and that too in urdu.
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Nikhat Riaz
#5 Posted by rahul_capri on December 25, 2007 11:39:53 pm
Thats great!.Do you have a blog? It would be great if you could share your work.
#6 Posted by Nikhat on December 25, 2007 11:59:14 pm
Re: # 5 Naaa, but I did translated one of my poetry in my saree huee angreizee in ilogs,"In an awe of circle". Have u read it?
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#7 Posted by Nikhat on December 25, 2007 11:59:52 pm
Re: # 5 Naaa, but I did translate one of my poetry in my saree huee angreizee in ilogs,"In an awe of circle". Have u read it?
Nikhat Riaz
Nikhat Riaz
#8 Posted by raiya_23 on December 26, 2007 8:06:07 am
it`s a nice piece but I can`t understand one thing ..ten long years???...it took the doctor ten long yrs 2 break through to her!!...& he didn`t break through..she told him herself...shouldn`t you reduce this duration to months maybe...because it makes the doctor seem highly inefficient
#9 Posted by Nikhat on December 26, 2007 11:21:10 pm
Re: # 8 Thanks dear..The account of her life was baffling enough to shut down her senses completely not for months not for a year but for a whole decade. And chanda! if person is determined not to speak, not to eat or not to heal no doctor, no medicine on earth could help.
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