Chimera

Re: # 14 Thank you for reading it. It is one of my most favorite stories though I hardly like my own work :-)

Extremely captivating! Very well written. I think I am growing just too fond of your writings Ayesha.

Please write more.

Best wishes

Re: # 12 Thanks for stopping by! And I am glad you liked it.

i think this otry was masterized bye the writter by leaving a question mark on readers face....beautiful

Re: # 10 Just a recurring dream. Not all stories have good endings! But will try :)

what was the link of Father's death with the story ??????

can u explain it??

Re: # 8

great .I am impressed.u r ayesha???

please make next time a good ending :)

Re: # 7 Yes, I did :)

Re: # 6

oh now i got it

thanks :)

u wrote it???

Re: # 5 I have read some of the best contemporary literature in both Urdu and English and I have noticed that the writer basically likes teasing readers by ending the story when the reader wants to know more hence leaving the reader with so many questions. The good story I believe is which makes you think even when it finishes.

So you have got the point it is all an illusion of the protagonist. A lovelorn who knew this lady but eventually lost her and now they meet only in imagination. “She keeps coming back to her…�

I like this piece of writing

but iam confused

was there hope in the end or not

please clearify that

what is writers point on that???


hope or desperation or some illusion

Re: # 3 Thank you!

enjoyed , good story teller

Re: # 1 Thanks!

Consistently fascinating, it is an almost voluptuous pleasure to read, a hell of a good story.