Whole Lotta Shakin’ Goin’ On

Re: # 10; Tahir

I can and did read between the lines you imbecile! I take it you have no grace to take a compliment civily. I meant your writing style and not necessarily the content.

Wo keya kehte hein 'poochhal' ke baray mein? or is it 'dum' instead?

What an idiot!

Re: # 8
I could cry on your behalf Dr. Cheema!

As a gentleman, I have no choice in the matter; I must say THANK YOU for reading.

And reading always improves one's mind, especially when done between the lines.

Regards.

Re: # 7
Miss Shandana Minhas I presume?

Don't spend too much time in the sun; save some for reading and the rest for writing.

As for the 'bloody' part, some interacters here are still recuperating from the knockouts I inflicted when they decided to fight outside the moral-ethical ring.

The next one? I might call it: A WHOLE LOTTA INTERACTIN' GOIN' ON....

Regards.

Despite what I said to you on the other board (which I stand by), a good write up. I read some of your articles from before and came up with the same conclusion; you ARE good, keep it up.

Cheers

laugh out loud funny. either i spent too much time in the sun after swimming today or you're a 'bloody good' writer.

Re: # 3
Mr. Zuber, right?

"I like the way you composed interesting enough to be read from head to toe, I admired your writing."

It is for readers such as yourself that I write. That you were able to devote many minutes of your life enjoying the subtleties, convinces me that the right written word still carries plenty of power even in this age.

Thanks.

Re: # 2
Mr. Lover,

This 'intelligent' piece was recovered from the stomach of the CHOWK monster! Any monster that deprives readers of the good things in life needs to be put away for good.

Regards.

Re: # 1
Mr. Gul,

I did not get to read Mr. Chauhan's contribution. Perhaps I will soon.

That you were able to appreciate the compositional aspects of the piece is in itself another compliment!

Thanks indeed.

Regards.

"The young mother’s face stands exposed for precisely 0.786 seconds during which I, with an audible gasp, am privileged to appreciate indescribable beauty that honestly deserves to be protected from colonising eyes. A resentful look from her muscular husband blocks my entertainment channel, activates all the dormant religious beliefs, and forces me to lower the gaze—just as The Book commands"

Gee whiz! you certainly sound like a seasoned traveler who can avoid falling asleep on a flight, I dont even wait for it to take off before I fall asleep.
I like the way you composed interesting enough to be read from head to toe, I admired your writing.

very intelligent write up

Tahir,
Enjoyed reading it. Very well composed. Have you read the one written by Salim Chuhan?