Whole Lotta Shakin’ Goin’ On

Tahir,
Enjoyed reading it. Very well composed. Have you read the one written by Salim Chuhan?

very intelligent write up

"The young mother’s face stands exposed for precisely 0.786 seconds during which I, with an audible gasp, am privileged to appreciate indescribable beauty that honestly deserves to be protected from colonising eyes. A resentful look from her muscular husband blocks my entertainment channel, activates all the dormant religious beliefs, and forces me to lower the gaze—just as The Book commands"

Gee whiz! you certainly sound like a seasoned traveler who can avoid falling asleep on a flight, I dont even wait for it to take off before I fall asleep.
I like the way you composed interesting enough to be read from head to toe, I admired your writing.

Re: # 1
Mr. Gul,

I did not get to read Mr. Chauhan's contribution. Perhaps I will soon.

That you were able to appreciate the compositional aspects of the piece is in itself another compliment!

Thanks indeed.

Regards.

Re: # 2
Mr. Lover,

This 'intelligent' piece was recovered from the stomach of the CHOWK monster! Any monster that deprives readers of the good things in life needs to be put away for good.

Regards.

Re: # 3
Mr. Zuber, right?

"I like the way you composed interesting enough to be read from head to toe, I admired your writing."

It is for readers such as yourself that I write. That you were able to devote many minutes of your life enjoying the subtleties, convinces me that the right written word still carries plenty of power even in this age.

Thanks.

laugh out loud funny. either i spent too much time in the sun after swimming today or you're a 'bloody good' writer.

Despite what I said to you on the other board (which I stand by), a good write up. I read some of your articles from before and came up with the same conclusion; you ARE good, keep it up.

Cheers

Re: # 7
Miss Shandana Minhas I presume?

Don't spend too much time in the sun; save some for reading and the rest for writing.

As for the 'bloody' part, some interacters here are still recuperating from the knockouts I inflicted when they decided to fight outside the moral-ethical ring.

The next one? I might call it: A WHOLE LOTTA INTERACTIN' GOIN' ON....

Regards.

Re: # 8
I could cry on your behalf Dr. Cheema!

As a gentleman, I have no choice in the matter; I must say THANK YOU for reading.

And reading always improves one's mind, especially when done between the lines.

Regards.

Re: # 10; Tahir

I can and did read between the lines you imbecile! I take it you have no grace to take a compliment civily. I meant your writing style and not necessarily the content.

Wo keya kehte hein 'poochhal' ke baray mein? or is it 'dum' instead?

What an idiot!

a good piece...it was hilarious and it was not at all a surprise.

Some of the most religiously conservative people (Urstruly for one - and urstruly can write some really good porno stuff with foot fetishes and works) write brilliantly.

However, in your case you sound way too rational when compared to tyour interacts on other boards!

#11 AKcheema that is a hazard to have to put up with!!!!

Tahir so was the "Whole Lotta Shakin’ Goin’ On" in your burkha the result of "Operation Shielded Dessert"

or was this a typo with the extra "s"?

And you are a pontificating little prig!

Since Glasgow is in Scotland you’ve not mentioned Scottish people once, but kept on harping about English people and No they are not same, scots dress differently they wear kilts.

Re: # 15 ofcourse he knows it - he saw Carry on up the khyber when in Pakistan!