Nipa Chowrangi

Well written Shandana,

But the ending is a bit vague

for us non-artsy types.

Ras

Re: # 23

Hamidm2 sahib, I don't know that clown. All I know is he showed up here, started bad-mouthing the writer and when I defended her (not that she needs it), miaN HP took umbrage and started calling me by choice terms!

You really think HE has common sense?! Perhaps so, but his sense of jealousy overcomes everything else, apparently.

Well BJ,

I would rather not write, if have to plagiarize like you.
Being a leech or a stalker is no qualification.

bj,

... i have to admit you are a pretty good writer (you should write more often) but you don't have half of hp's common sense .... oh well, you can't have everything ......

.... now this tahir guy - who the hell is this clown ?

..... will someone push tahir off the balcony and put him out of his misery?

.... shandana, nice job ....

BTW, HP, I think YOU can not write worth a fart!

Re: # 19

Kambakhat, if that is true the darn thing is too subtle for me! :)

Re: # 18

Yaar HP, you are another absolute bhanDua in your own right! I did not mean to feel you left out, it is just that Tahir miaN needed some attention. Sorry!

Every one of you is full of shit.
You guys do not know how to read.learn to read a story,
learn to read between the lines.the woman killed her
husband and none of you even know about that.
i am glad she killed the bastard.if she got a chance she is going to kill you idiots too.

Instead of discussing what she wrote, this BJ would rather discuss her.

I don't know whats with this person that he wants to stalk every women writer or interactor on Chowk. This is just so pathetic and on top of that he is intellectually dwarf, physically a pygmy, and mentally a midget who can't even figure out the difference between comments and the issues.
get lost...sometimes pay attention to your own wife, i.e if you have any!

Re: # 16

Shandana, the "old" profile is great. I personally found it very funny, witty and unique.

Obviously, Tahir miaN is highly jealous of your work. He wishes he could write like you (and hopefully make tonnes of money) - but he is lacking the "tools"! So he - like the Aslam - resorts to using the one between his legs.

So, he tries to come here and start talking absurd inanities. It is the same trick this guy pulled on Azra's board earlier.

It does not work!

He still looks foolish.

middle class babablacksheep, india pakistan insults, gentle ana, it's good to be back on chowk...thank you all for reading and responding :)

tahir, is editing/erasing the past different from rewriting it? is either ok? have been considering what you said about the profile i created several years ago being 'disturbing', what do you think about 'shandana minhas aspires to create enduring works of postcoital literature' instead?

Re: # 14

[What we, as Pakistanis, should or should not feel must be left to us.]

That is what the world thought for a long time and let you and your stupid pals be.

Big mistake! You guys don't DESERVE to be left alone. You guys make the most horrible messes and the world is tired of cleaning up after you all.

Sala you Islamist and your pals - they hold that place hostage - by the balls! Nobody dares to even squeak - because your harami jihadi pals are always ready with that dagger!

One squeak from any of the oppressed Pakistanis - and that sala mullah (YOU) goes:

"Apostasy, apostasy, apostasy! Maaro, maaro, maaro!"

You salaas don't deserve to be left alone! Otherwise sooner or later, you saalas will blow the place up and take the neighborhood with you!

It takes a lot of guts to write the type of stuff the Minhas writes - the serious stuff - in her own witty style!

The stuff that is real!

It is the easiest thing to do the crappy, crappy vomit that you occasionally relieve yourself of on these pages here. Saala, you feel rather proud of that lothra hanging between your legs, not realizing that it is merely your useliess device to hurt women. You saala don't have the reality, nor the skill!

Saala, you are the ultimate coward - you don't even dare to bring up the issue of beating women. Saala, you probably identify with that Aslam creep in this story!

Saala coward, making a pathetic attempt to ridicule the writer instead! Saala, nobody buys your stupidity!

Re: # 13
Are you Miss Minhas?

Not only are you not gentle, you're not even a man. And you're definitely not a writer!

What we, as Pakistanis, should or should not feel must be left to us. Mind your own suicidal farmers out in India.

And never give up your regular job of performing BJs. Never be ashamed to admit who you really are. You blow people up and away.

Over and out.

Tahir miaN,

I think Pakistanis should be rather glad that they have one or two REAL writers, instead of the useless bhanDuas like you!

Regards,
Everybody!

Re: # 10, #11

Tahir miaN, she only meant in a literary figurative way what YOU do in real life in actuality!

That's all!

And:

"(being the butt), .... a lecher, .... a bimbo"

With so much talent at your disposal, you may wish to edit your PROFILE at CHOWK. The information is disturbing!