The Old Bungalow
MVJ Simon May 21, 2008
#12 Posted by MeiraJ08 on August 11, 2008 3:19:45 am
There is some exciting word-usage, image-captivity here:
"octagonal verandah...
Polished red oxide floor...
With tiger claws at it’s feet
Clasping a globe"
but I don't understand why you let it go later, and the rhyme-scheme again, why do chowk-poets think that a poem needs to rhyme? It is really not a necessity...let the thought come, and frame its insides. forget decorum!!
I look forward to seeing your next one...'octagonal verandah' nice.
In the nearest language, it always works.
"octagonal verandah...
Polished red oxide floor...
With tiger claws at it’s feet
Clasping a globe"
but I don't understand why you let it go later, and the rhyme-scheme again, why do chowk-poets think that a poem needs to rhyme? It is really not a necessity...let the thought come, and frame its insides. forget decorum!!
I look forward to seeing your next one...'octagonal verandah' nice.
In the nearest language, it always works.
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#11 Posted by MVJSimon on June 10, 2008 6:22:51 am
Re: # 6
Thanks, Ejaz! You made my day! (late in the evening though!:))
Thanks, Ejaz! You made my day! (late in the evening though!:))
#10 Posted by MVJSimon on June 10, 2008 6:21:03 am
Re: # 5
Thank you so much, nature lover! I am so glad you liked it!
Thank you so much, nature lover! I am so glad you liked it!
#7 Posted by MVJSimon on June 10, 2008 6:09:56 am
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, BJ2.
Reality sucks! Doesn't it? :}
Reality sucks! Doesn't it? :}
#4 Posted by Shah2 on June 4, 2008 4:16:51 am
Soory embeded link dos not work on FP
This is Gulzar (indian Poets ) reminiscenes of His "bunglow"
http://youtube.com/watch?v=3POGRbSUPtY&feature=Rece ntlyWatched&page=1&t=t&f=b
This is Gulzar (indian Poets ) reminiscenes of His "bunglow"
http://youtube.com/watch?v=3POGRbSUPtY&feature=Rece ntlyWatched&page=1&t=t&f=b
#1 Posted by BJ2 on June 2, 2008 8:31:43 pm
Beautiful reminiscences! Would have been even better without the reality intruding! :)
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