kashkin dabruski September 3, 2008
#1 Posted by quin on September 4, 2008 5:48:24 pm
“When they hear the news of a daughter born
Their face turns dark, with grief they are torn
By the ill they see in the good news
With shame from people they hide and muse
Will they keep this shame or bury it in the dust
Both are evil choices and choose they must�
Qur'an 16: 58 -59 (lamenting and capturing the atrocious act of pre-Islamic Arabs when they used to bury their daughters at their birth - rendition by me)
Their face turns dark, with grief they are torn
By the ill they see in the good news
With shame from people they hide and muse
Will they keep this shame or bury it in the dust
Both are evil choices and choose they must�
Qur'an 16: 58 -59 (lamenting and capturing the atrocious act of pre-Islamic Arabs when they used to bury their daughters at their birth - rendition by me)
#2 Posted by MatloobZaman on September 5, 2008 12:03:12 am
Re: # 1
MashaAllah Quin
A nice rendition, may Allah SWT be pleased with you, ameen.
MashaAllah Quin
A nice rendition, may Allah SWT be pleased with you, ameen.
#3 Posted by MeiraJ08 on September 5, 2008 10:07:35 am
Even in poetry it is so harsh. poor wretched girls.
In the nearest language, it always works.
In the nearest language, it always works.
#4 Posted by quin on September 5, 2008 6:08:53 pm
Re: # 2 MatloobZaman,
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
I share my renditions of Quran to share the sheer elation which I feel by doing that.
I keep doing the renditions as I read Quran - for me the best way to read Quran - as that way its living energy is transferred, which otherwise, in a passive reading may not as much transferred, at least in my case.
When I see a response like yours - it is doubly uplifting and it spurs me to do more. I am deeply indebted for that. In my iLog's I have posted some other renditions:
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
I share my renditions of Quran to share the sheer elation which I feel by doing that.
I keep doing the renditions as I read Quran - for me the best way to read Quran - as that way its living energy is transferred, which otherwise, in a passive reading may not as much transferred, at least in my case.
When I see a response like yours - it is doubly uplifting and it spurs me to do more. I am deeply indebted for that. In my iLog's I have posted some other renditions:
#5 Posted by quin on September 5, 2008 6:15:49 pm
Re: # 2 MatloobZaman,
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
I share my renditions of Quran to share the sheer elation which I feel by doing that.
I keep doing the renditions as I read Quran - for me the best way to read Quran - as that way its living energy is transferred, which otherwise, in a passive reading may not as much transferred, at least in my case.
When I see a response like yours - it is doubly uplifting and it spurs me to do more. I am deeply indebted for that. In my iLog's I have posted some other renditions:
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68624/47644 - Al Qadr and Al Falaq
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68220/47644 - Al Asar
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/67515/47644- Al Quariah
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68666/47644 - a poetic response on the two verse of Al Falaq
Your feedback is appreciated if you so incline to have a look. If you find any areas requiring improvement, I will be glad to hear.
I do not call this work as translations for a reason, as of course, you understand.
Mutaal Mooquin
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
I share my renditions of Quran to share the sheer elation which I feel by doing that.
I keep doing the renditions as I read Quran - for me the best way to read Quran - as that way its living energy is transferred, which otherwise, in a passive reading may not as much transferred, at least in my case.
When I see a response like yours - it is doubly uplifting and it spurs me to do more. I am deeply indebted for that. In my iLog's I have posted some other renditions:
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68624/47644 - Al Qadr and Al Falaq
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68220/47644 - Al Asar
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/67515/47644- Al Quariah
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68666/47644 - a poetic response on the two verse of Al Falaq
Your feedback is appreciated if you so incline to have a look. If you find any areas requiring improvement, I will be glad to hear.
I do not call this work as translations for a reason, as of course, you understand.
Mutaal Mooquin
#6 Posted by MatloobZaman on September 5, 2008 10:21:44 pm
Re: # 5
I am pleased to know that you go beyond plain reading that most of us are accustomed to, it certainly helps to indulge a layer deeper and "seek" to understand, and that certainly begins to make more sense as to how much on the real playing fields the scripture addresses the issues and concerns we come across in our life.
May the Almighty bless us with the opportunity to relate to what HE has blessed us with in the holy book which is not meant to be covered in preciously decorated covers and placed at heights we rarely reach out to clear cobwebs and dust.
I will most certainly refer to all the renditions that you mention as being posted in your ilogs inshaAllah.
May HE bless us with better understanding, ameen.
I am pleased to know that you go beyond plain reading that most of us are accustomed to, it certainly helps to indulge a layer deeper and "seek" to understand, and that certainly begins to make more sense as to how much on the real playing fields the scripture addresses the issues and concerns we come across in our life.
May the Almighty bless us with the opportunity to relate to what HE has blessed us with in the holy book which is not meant to be covered in preciously decorated covers and placed at heights we rarely reach out to clear cobwebs and dust.
I will most certainly refer to all the renditions that you mention as being posted in your ilogs inshaAllah.
May HE bless us with better understanding, ameen.
#7 Posted by philosopher on September 6, 2008 9:13:10 am
Re: # 1 quin
wonderfull. I was looking for these verses but did not know the chapter number.
Let me say i am deeply impressed by you after reading your ilogs especialy the one explaining the meaning of "taqwa" and "khashia" I had almost the same interpretation in mind and discussed it in many interacts last year. You are much more fluent than me in putting these complex thoughts into words.
keep it up
wonderfull. I was looking for these verses but did not know the chapter number.
Let me say i am deeply impressed by you after reading your ilogs especialy the one explaining the meaning of "taqwa" and "khashia" I had almost the same interpretation in mind and discussed it in many interacts last year. You are much more fluent than me in putting these complex thoughts into words.
keep it up
#8 Posted by quin on September 6, 2008 5:52:16 pm
Re: # 7 philosopher, your note is heartwarming and I am grateful for that. I am happy to hear the voices like yours and MatloobZaman's. There are not very many and therefore are precious. Qur'an is our common humanity's heritage. Misunderstandings about it make my heart bleed. But I try to understand it for myself. I do feel urge to share my understanding and feelings about it through my renditions or comments. Therefore, such feedbacks and any constructive criticism is most welcome.
Regarding the subject of killing their children, Qur'an mentions this, 5 more times in addition to the earlier reference. One instance is in the powerful Surah "At Takweer (Overthrowing) which was posted by Viqram on his iLog. I am sure you will enjoy that too.
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68667/35288
"When the female (infant), buried alive, is questioned -
For what crime she was killed;" - Quran (81: 8 -9) Tr. Yousaf Ali
Regarding the subject of killing their children, Qur'an mentions this, 5 more times in addition to the earlier reference. One instance is in the powerful Surah "At Takweer (Overthrowing) which was posted by Viqram on his iLog. I am sure you will enjoy that too.
http://www.chowk.com/ilogs/68667/35288
"When the female (infant), buried alive, is questioned -
For what crime she was killed;" - Quran (81: 8 -9) Tr. Yousaf Ali
#9 Posted by quin on September 6, 2008 6:36:50 pm
# 7: Further to my previous posts, following are the references in Qur'an to the said subject (as far as I know):
6.140
6.151
16. 58-59
17.31
62.12
81.8-9
Also, kindly let me know about the interacts (URL or article (s))where you had such discussion. I am interested to see what transpired. Thanks
6.140
6.151
16. 58-59
17.31
62.12
81.8-9
Also, kindly let me know about the interacts (URL or article (s))where you had such discussion. I am interested to see what transpired. Thanks
#10 Posted by crazyghan on September 7, 2008 6:49:27 am
For a different perspective, here is my take on the topic. Religion does not incite terrorism, does not incite violence, does not exclude and seclude women, does not order a cultural take over of the non-Arabs ... well, if Islam has nothing to do with any of these, do these beliefs and acts fall from the sky!? I don't think so.
Following are a few quotes that tell a different story:
Quran- 4:15 “If any of your women are guilty of lewdness, take the evidence of four (reliable) witness from amongst you against them; if they testify, confine them to houses until death do claim them. Or God ordain for them some (other) way.�
Quran-24:2 “The woman and the man guilty of adultery or fornication—flog each of them with hundred stripes: Let no compassion move you in their case, in a matter prescribed by God, if ye believe in God and the last day.�
Quran-17:32 “ Nor come nigh to adultery: for it is a shameful (deed) and an evil, opening the road (to other evils).
Quran-33:33 “stay quietly in your houses, and make not a dazzling display.�
and others.
Stop repeating the story that Islam ended the burial of daughters. Move on. Furthermore, the bulk of honor killings happen in Islamic countries, are ignored and often sanctified by Islamic authorities and such acts of violence are entirely religious in nature.
Following are a few quotes that tell a different story:
Quran- 4:15 “If any of your women are guilty of lewdness, take the evidence of four (reliable) witness from amongst you against them; if they testify, confine them to houses until death do claim them. Or God ordain for them some (other) way.�
Quran-24:2 “The woman and the man guilty of adultery or fornication—flog each of them with hundred stripes: Let no compassion move you in their case, in a matter prescribed by God, if ye believe in God and the last day.�
Quran-17:32 “ Nor come nigh to adultery: for it is a shameful (deed) and an evil, opening the road (to other evils).
Quran-33:33 “stay quietly in your houses, and make not a dazzling display.�
and others.
Stop repeating the story that Islam ended the burial of daughters. Move on. Furthermore, the bulk of honor killings happen in Islamic countries, are ignored and often sanctified by Islamic authorities and such acts of violence are entirely religious in nature.
#11 Posted by quin on September 7, 2008 5:30:45 pm
Re: # 10 crazyghan,
I don't think anyone is saying that religion (for some or many) does not incite violence or does not exclude women etc.
At least, my belief is that one learns from religion what one’s temperament wants to learn or one’s education allows one to learn. All religions are mired in contradictions and paradoxes. That is the nature of it. Why? It is long discussion. For now, I just want to comment that the core wisdom of every religion is forgotten in the superficial details.
When I read those verses which I referred (where such crimes are mentioned) I see the glimpse of the core message. The verses which were related to day to day affairs of that time, the one which you referred, must be seen in its historical context.
The point which comes across looking at the whole life and character of the Prophet and the message which is discerned by reading the Sacred Text of Quran all leads to one thing: Sanctity and respect of life, in every shape and form.
Islam at its inception did give women many rights which were not available to them before Islam. That is the spirit of Quran. If we follow the spirit, we will always want to move forward, not go backward. We cannot read Quran just in literal way. Having said that, I agree many do read Quran in a very literal fashion. That mixed with level of education and understanding, and all other socio-political problems, such literal readings and misunderstanding about the real message of Quran become a deadly weapon in the hands of backward looking and / or power hungry people.
Lastly, the verses you have referred still cannot be said to justify the acts like killing of infants or women. As I said these verses must not be seen out of context.
I know then there is discussion about context and permanence etc., which is a long discussion with possibly no resolution. Therefore I usually tells myself, that I learn from Quran what I want to learn and what it wants to teach me. And I never have felt that it ever wanted to teach me violence or chauvinism.
I don't think anyone is saying that religion (for some or many) does not incite violence or does not exclude women etc.
At least, my belief is that one learns from religion what one’s temperament wants to learn or one’s education allows one to learn. All religions are mired in contradictions and paradoxes. That is the nature of it. Why? It is long discussion. For now, I just want to comment that the core wisdom of every religion is forgotten in the superficial details.
When I read those verses which I referred (where such crimes are mentioned) I see the glimpse of the core message. The verses which were related to day to day affairs of that time, the one which you referred, must be seen in its historical context.
The point which comes across looking at the whole life and character of the Prophet and the message which is discerned by reading the Sacred Text of Quran all leads to one thing: Sanctity and respect of life, in every shape and form.
Islam at its inception did give women many rights which were not available to them before Islam. That is the spirit of Quran. If we follow the spirit, we will always want to move forward, not go backward. We cannot read Quran just in literal way. Having said that, I agree many do read Quran in a very literal fashion. That mixed with level of education and understanding, and all other socio-political problems, such literal readings and misunderstanding about the real message of Quran become a deadly weapon in the hands of backward looking and / or power hungry people.
Lastly, the verses you have referred still cannot be said to justify the acts like killing of infants or women. As I said these verses must not be seen out of context.
I know then there is discussion about context and permanence etc., which is a long discussion with possibly no resolution. Therefore I usually tells myself, that I learn from Quran what I want to learn and what it wants to teach me. And I never have felt that it ever wanted to teach me violence or chauvinism.
#12 Posted by crazyghan on September 7, 2008 7:42:04 pm
"The verses which were related to day to day affairs of that time, the one which you referred, must be seen in its historical context."
@ quin
That is where the problems start. Using that logic, let's not pick and run. The whole idea of religion, especially Islam should be seen in historical context. An ideology that worked for the Arabs back then CAN NOT be compatible with today's needs and the society today. Furthermore the 1400 year old logic, judgment and system can not guide today's life. Religion (Islam for that matter) has expired.
As for the core message, well, if the central book of a religion can not deliver its supposed "core message", it fails to deliver.
I would rather see 99% of the Muslim population not read the book and its verses - they don't get the context. They are too extreme to pick and choose...
@ quin
That is where the problems start. Using that logic, let's not pick and run. The whole idea of religion, especially Islam should be seen in historical context. An ideology that worked for the Arabs back then CAN NOT be compatible with today's needs and the society today. Furthermore the 1400 year old logic, judgment and system can not guide today's life. Religion (Islam for that matter) has expired.
As for the core message, well, if the central book of a religion can not deliver its supposed "core message", it fails to deliver.
I would rather see 99% of the Muslim population not read the book and its verses - they don't get the context. They are too extreme to pick and choose...
#13 Posted by rashid_s on September 7, 2008 9:21:33 pm
“…….often sanctified by Islamic authorities and such acts of violence are entirely religious in nature�.
That is it! “ISLAMIC AUTHORITIES� is an euphemism for the Muslim Church hence the 'Religion' and its OPERATIVES THE PRIESTS; similar to the Institutions of other Religions and Priests.
Every thing the Muslim people do in the name of their pagan customs is termed Islamic! The Muslim Church is the best follower of previous Religions, and has copied their tribal and pagan rules in the apocrypha in the name of Muhammad, which they call Hadis.
'Islam' is only an Arabic word-- for Quran is in Arabic language because Muhammad, the person was an Arab-- for an universal/natural code and there in is no Church and priesthood but only our own conscience(10-35,36)which should guide us.
By the way the verse on Rajam(stoning) , was written on piece of paper that was with Ayisha and strangely enough her GOAT ate it while she was mourning the death of her husband the Prophet (Bukhari etc)!!
Please refer to the Bible in Leviticus 20:10; Deuteronomy 22:23,24. to see where the whole drama came from. With further delving into it , one may find the practice going even further back in human evolution.
Rashid
That is it! “ISLAMIC AUTHORITIES� is an euphemism for the Muslim Church hence the 'Religion' and its OPERATIVES THE PRIESTS; similar to the Institutions of other Religions and Priests.
Every thing the Muslim people do in the name of their pagan customs is termed Islamic! The Muslim Church is the best follower of previous Religions, and has copied their tribal and pagan rules in the apocrypha in the name of Muhammad, which they call Hadis.
'Islam' is only an Arabic word-- for Quran is in Arabic language because Muhammad, the person was an Arab-- for an universal/natural code and there in is no Church and priesthood but only our own conscience(10-35,36)which should guide us.
By the way the verse on Rajam(stoning) , was written on piece of paper that was with Ayisha and strangely enough her GOAT ate it while she was mourning the death of her husband the Prophet (Bukhari etc)!!
Please refer to the Bible in Leviticus 20:10; Deuteronomy 22:23,24. to see where the whole drama came from. With further delving into it , one may find the practice going even further back in human evolution.
Rashid
#14 Posted by akcheema on September 7, 2008 9:43:13 pm
Re: # 11; quin
[[At least, my belief is that one learns from religion what one’s temperament wants to learn or one’s education allows one to learn. All religions are mired in contradictions and paradoxes. That is the nature of it. Why? It is long discussion.]]
if I had a dollar for the number of times I have heard this silly argument .... something "given" to us by an infallible god is either "all correct" or it is not ... simply NO TWO WAYS about it!
It either makes sense or it does not .... the rest is just an apologist's back-footed defence of the indefensible!! which is what you are quin sir .... AN APOLOGIST FOR YOUR confused, self-contradictory and divisive argument of a faith!
take care ..... for now
[[At least, my belief is that one learns from religion what one’s temperament wants to learn or one’s education allows one to learn. All religions are mired in contradictions and paradoxes. That is the nature of it. Why? It is long discussion.]]
if I had a dollar for the number of times I have heard this silly argument .... something "given" to us by an infallible god is either "all correct" or it is not ... simply NO TWO WAYS about it!
It either makes sense or it does not .... the rest is just an apologist's back-footed defence of the indefensible!! which is what you are quin sir .... AN APOLOGIST FOR YOUR confused, self-contradictory and divisive argument of a faith!
take care ..... for now
#15 Posted by rabiawsti on September 7, 2008 9:50:02 pm
ok so when jewish rabbis overruled or re-interpreted aspects of the hebrew bible in the talmud did they all suddenly become atheists?
#16 Posted by akcheema on September 7, 2008 11:37:12 pm
Re: # 15; rabia
the "re-interpretation" of religious text/scripture has nothing whatsoever to do with the text/scripture itself .... it is more to do with OUR OWN "cntemporary" sensitivities ...... God's word is infallible/unchangeable and written in "black & white" FOR ALL TIMES and there is (cannot be) any ambiguity about it
one example is (purely hypothetical) homosexuality .... God doesn't change His mind about how he feels from time to time! He is (supposed to be) beyond the confines of time .... it is our contemporary sensitivities and conveniences that urge us to "re-interpret" .... jewish/christian/muslim alike!
will be back properly in a couple of weeks to discuss this in more detail if you are interested
Khuda Hafiz for now
the "re-interpretation" of religious text/scripture has nothing whatsoever to do with the text/scripture itself .... it is more to do with OUR OWN "cntemporary" sensitivities ...... God's word is infallible/unchangeable and written in "black & white" FOR ALL TIMES and there is (cannot be) any ambiguity about it
one example is (purely hypothetical) homosexuality .... God doesn't change His mind about how he feels from time to time! He is (supposed to be) beyond the confines of time .... it is our contemporary sensitivities and conveniences that urge us to "re-interpret" .... jewish/christian/muslim alike!
will be back properly in a couple of weeks to discuss this in more detail if you are interested
Khuda Hafiz for now
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