The Smile of Dinah

Re: # 5 Oh well, the tags especially the first one sure is a spoiler. I think they should put it in the end of the article.

Thanks though for reading and appreciating! :-)

i liked the thought behind it, though the tag kinda gave away the ending for me, but maybe that's just me. good work!
i said i\'d never compromise with the mystery tramp but now i realize, he ain\'t selling any alibis, as i look into the vacuum of his eyes and say \'do you want to make a deal?\'

Re: # 3 Thanks Faiqah! The story is also about killing one's desire and that may not necessarily be only physical ones.

The story hints of human psychology to never forgive him/herself... to never be happy totally or be lachrymose exactly. Nice work...

Re: # 1 I'm glad you liked it.

The tragic accounts of Dinah are quite touching. The way you unfolded her internal conflict is stirring. The story seems real and you kept it short, precise and tightly knit. A good job all in all.
Nikhat Riaz