Bala’s Hair
Ayesha Umar August 23, 2009
#6 Posted by verve on September 12, 2009 11:49:24 am
Re: # 5 Many thanks for the kind words. My pleasure you liked it!
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#5 Posted by Vareesha on September 9, 2009 3:34:18 am
Well the article is superb, the words and the concept were extremely impressive that I hardly noticed any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Bala seems to be a lively character of our daily lives and the writer should be encouraged for the originality and spirit.
#4 Posted by verve on September 9, 2009 2:41:41 am
Re: # 3 Goodness! Quite a lot of mistakes...
Should be careful next time!
Should be careful next time!
#3 Posted by BJ2 on August 30, 2009 9:21:11 am
Re: # 2
Here are a few that I noticed:
[One would and park the car.]
[No one dare to ask Bala to mind his own business…]
[Bala completely ignored the heroin…]
[Spogmay was given a room inside the mansion as oppose to the servant quarters.]
By and large, it is better not to rely on chowk editors for proof-reading a manuscript. :)
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Here are a few that I noticed:
[One would and park the car.]
[No one dare to ask Bala to mind his own business…]
[Bala completely ignored the heroin…]
[Spogmay was given a room inside the mansion as oppose to the servant quarters.]
By and large, it is better not to rely on chowk editors for proof-reading a manuscript. :)
:):):)
#2 Posted by verve on August 30, 2009 2:09:27 am
Re: # 1 Thank you! :)
Can you point out the errors so I bring it to the editor's notice and be careful in the future?
Can you point out the errors so I bring it to the editor's notice and be careful in the future?
#1 Posted by BJ2 on August 29, 2009 6:45:19 am
An interesting read, in spite of a few grammar issues.
:):):)
:):):)
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