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This was really interesting, but why did you kill off all your characters? Usually, you do that in sixth grade when you can`t think of a better ending..... perhaps this needs a rethink. It was really jarring and ruined the impact of the story for me...no pun intended...

Bina.

This was really interesting, but why did you kill off all your characters? Usually, you do that in sixth grade when you can`t think of a better ending..... perhaps this needs a rethink. It was really jarring and ruined the impact of the story for me...no pun intended...

Bina.

Re: Star Marlboro

You wrote as a part of your intro, that you are ``Hopelessly confused about life and the future``.

My question is, who isn`t?

Welcome to the club!

I like it. It has the swift, sharp feeling of thoughts. I don`t know how many people, when reminiscing, think in complete sentences, but I know I don`t.

Aziz

well good stuff id say .. but it could have been better ...

i dont know if its just me but i feel that u were digressing alot from the main topic....

the style was absolutely outstanding btw!

then again... excellent stuff.. and would be looking forward to ur articles in the future

i am a confused 18 yrs teen think feel see diesel oil rushdie wanna be (i love that man). He guides and inspires me... prompts me to work higher and better as i sit here in front of my computer thinking feeling seeing how i can become more like him. Someday... perhaps when im 19.

thanks for showing me the light durdana.

humbled and grateful

with love,

*

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U R Good.

Rishi

This was really wonderful.

I found myself reading parts 1 & 2 again

and again...



love and loss, struggle and longing,

detachment and wholeness, lost potential...you have created a intricate tapestry which reveals more and more with each veiwing. I can`t wait to read more of your work...

Sakina

Man,you must be really confused to do more than complete your sentences.To tell you frankly i just didnt have the curosity to read any futher than``Texas sun``.What are you trying to say,Are you a 18 yrs teen think smell,see dream breath automobile tyres,oil,smoke& Diesel(????i can t find any )Is it Rushdie who started these wannabe writer that we see in flood of such articles here.