Enchanted Forest

Well done! I thought there is always a hope whenever I am in forest or in wilderness.Away from the noises. Forest is the place where I get in the loudness of my own silence. Anyway, you have expressed it very well. I wish if I could understand the way you felt.

Cheerio bye!

Zeej, its good, no, not good, great, i knew u were a great writer, this is something new........... cool, keep it up :)

Zeenat Jahaan:

Yaar kamaal kardiya hay! A poet hidden in you? Such an observant play of passion, ethos and pathos.

Liked this line:
--Hearts entwined, souls enmeshed.

Have some mixed feelings about these two:
--Here search forlorn, all in vain,
--Transitory strangers, fates perusing.

A digression: I cringe when a postscript or a bold by-line in an article or poem appears. As if the writer is not content with what has already been written; (and) wants to control or channelise the reader`s thoughts in a certain direction. Maybe it is just me! I`d rather explore the nuances of the written piece on my own. Admittedly, one can soar with feelings or be crippled by doubts. But that is a chance as a reader I`d like to take.

love and regards,