Birth of a Salesman

bohat alaa,

i master piece if i must say

yeh aur baat hai kay sara ka sara sar par say guzr giya hai:)

ross

Hmm, temp. you are late. It appears that fawad forgot to use a spell check befor submitting this piece :)

Rest after breakfast...

Dear Fawad,

Nice work. You remind of Thackeray-probably it is the writing style. Keep up the good work.

I think all of us are basically salesmen. Infants and toddlers are are good at selling their beautiful smiles and little mischiefs to gain love from elders; and we as human beings do it till the end of our lives. I think it is ingrained in our genetic psyche. However, it really starts troubling us when we start doing it conciously. I wonder why?

Superb essay. I wish it had been copy edited, or proof-read, at the very least. A common problem with the pieces on the Chowk

hunh?

I am such a Jahil.

A good effort apart from the NUMEROUS grammatical and spelling mistakes that plague the piece.

cheers.

If dear temporal reads this piece,he`s gonna abandon chowk for good,they say...:)

good one fadi where did u write it from yara sahe sahe bata mujhey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

``Papa Corn is back, popcorn khao bade ho jao``

Who is this goat. Kid you gotta improve a lot.

etc.

POP.

dear fawad

i am astonished at both this story and the responses that it has elicited.

regards

aakar patel

An excellent article. However, the most enjoyable part was writer`s profile and the name of his institution-perhaps included purposefully.