A J Nabi May 18, 2001
#6 Posted by sashayub on June 21, 2004 6:44:45 am
what happened next...................is there a sequel to this...................i really want to know.....?
#5 Posted by ajnabi on May 24, 2001 9:33:05 am
Temporal,
be patient myfriend before speaking too much of cliche...that in itself is a cliche.
thanks for reading...hope you enjoy (all who commented)
be patient myfriend before speaking too much of cliche...that in itself is a cliche.
thanks for reading...hope you enjoy (all who commented)
#4 Posted by temporal on May 22, 2001 3:04:30 pm
AJ:
...am loathe to comment on a person when all I have seen is the ankles, midriff or eyes...and then there are people who can tell a lot by seeing just those parts...
...hence you will understand that other than welcoming you here I cannot say much else...oh just a minor comment if you will...please go easy on the clichés (there b!)...
...and now a digression...
..there was another fellow on Chowk...he sent me a synopsis and a first chapter... his canvas was sort of similar...an American Desi, big money, drugs, armaments Mid East etc.... wonder whatever happened...or is this a revised version?...well, he knows my address...if it is him he knows where to reach me....
rgds,
t
...am loathe to comment on a person when all I have seen is the ankles, midriff or eyes...and then there are people who can tell a lot by seeing just those parts...
...hence you will understand that other than welcoming you here I cannot say much else...oh just a minor comment if you will...please go easy on the clichés (there b!)...
...and now a digression...
..there was another fellow on Chowk...he sent me a synopsis and a first chapter... his canvas was sort of similar...an American Desi, big money, drugs, armaments Mid East etc.... wonder whatever happened...or is this a revised version?...well, he knows my address...if it is him he knows where to reach me....
rgds,
t
#2 Posted by Ras Siddiqui on May 19, 2001 3:18:00 pm
A.J. Welcome to CHOWK!
You have a good beginning here.
Ras
#1 Posted by aicha on May 19, 2001 10:47:17 am
interesting but these cant come out in two/three.../n parts. They have to be read in one sitting. Liked it a lot and waiting...
aicha
aicha
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