Consequences

great stuff!!

crazy is goood.... it shows u are alive!

Hi Nausheen,

Your article was much too long to hold my interest. It was also very stereotypical of teenage life and my suggestion to you is that if you do feel compelled to write on such typical topics, please restrict yourself to brevity. Writing lengthy, repetitive stuff is not very productive. Doesn`t captivate your readers` interest. Write short, it`ll be much more effective. Good writing leaves an impact on the reader. Also, it would be as much in your interest as in ours, if you could expand your area of interest.

I just have to comment on your story once again. I really like how you expressed yourself and it`s very well written :)

IF you ever write anything else, let me know, I`d love to read it.

This is greatly done, I really liked your work, I hope you continue to keep writing.

Take care

Feelings

I leave with you with a thought ``there are either two losers or two winners in luv``

This is greatly done, I really liked your work, I hope you continue to keep writing.

Take care

Feelings

I leave with you with a thought ``there are either two losers or two winners in luv``

Riveting!!!... incisive... words used as a scalpel cutting right to the emotions they describe ... :)

That was very well written Nausheen...I wish i could write like that :)

Dear Nausheen,

Welcome to chowk! Loved this piece .Very simply written, and well narrated.Keep up the Great style.I find simplicity in writing somehow brings out the best of talents.

So you are a dreamer like me !dont call it crazy.. pleasee ... i thrive on this state of mind ....

You must have heard the old cliche`of kissing a few toads before you get your handsome prince !So hang in there ... keep writing and keep sharing ... and in between do keep in touch through interracting too!

With every Good Wish for many successful, Happy and Blissful years ahead :)[Ameen ]

Love,

sa:)

Nausheen,
You`re doing fine for someone almost 18.
Welcome to CHOWK.

Ras

nameless #4 The WP article rightly calls for pressure on Musharaff to take a clear cut stand on ending the violence in Kashmir. It is wrong in emphasizing this alone, and not emphasizing the other message that should also be given to Musharraf - namely one of encouragement to continue the excellent work he is doing in moving Pakistan along the path towards democracy and good governance.

Thank you everyone. This was the first story that I ever got published anywhere, so your support means a lot to me :)

Dear Nausheen:

Welcome to Chowk! This is beautiful and indicates you`ll only get better. Keep it up!

Aisha F Sarwari

Hey Nausheen,

I would just to like so say it takes courage to let go of something and to be able to come out & watch the sun again. Sometimes some ppl are worth your love and attention, they really are, but at the same time life does not let you believe in the fact. So be happy with what you have, and remember one thing everything in life happens for a reason. Keep up the good work of being strong.

That was quite a powerful story.... life is cruel but ``whatcha gonna do``

Some suggest ``ask for courage`` crap...others like me suggest its a vicious circle, u keep getting trapped in to your own web with or without realizing... and then you sing ``sweet lament`` to yourself... ``Peeja talkhi ko ghut kar bhi nasir.. is may bhi qudrat ne maza rakha hai``

The end result will be either a vicious cycle or complete bitterness.... in anycase, life goes on, ones just more involved than the other...

What can i say?

Beautiful...

I can totally relate to it..

wow...how do u manage to live each day with such passion..

Life could have been easier..nothing would be enough, u have already got all the words:)))

Keep writing and sharing with us!

-Hana

Dear 17,

Trust me nothing (&nobody) is worth all that you are willing to give up!

cheers and keep writing.

:)

Taimur.