3 Haikus
Zinnia January 4, 2002
#1 Posted by Ras Siddiqui on January 4, 2001 9:52:01 pm
Three reasons why Haiku is a wonderful way of expressing feelings.
Welcome to CHOWK Zinnia. We hope to see more
from you.
Ras
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#2 Posted by AAmir on January 4, 2001 9:52:21 pm
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#4 Posted by FarzanaVersey on January 5, 2001 12:48:36 am
Zinnia:
Ripe, bright, sensual...and crisp and caressing.
Aamir:
Would you have asked Ghalib why he wrote, ``Yoon to main bhi mooh mein zabaan rakhta hoon``? Kabhi to sharam karein aap...sometimes you quote such wonderful things and then you end up with this. If the poet wanted to be obvious, then verses would not be necessary. Samjhein?
Ripe, bright, sensual...and crisp and caressing.
Aamir:
Would you have asked Ghalib why he wrote, ``Yoon to main bhi mooh mein zabaan rakhta hoon``? Kabhi to sharam karein aap...sometimes you quote such wonderful things and then you end up with this. If the poet wanted to be obvious, then verses would not be necessary. Samjhein?
#5 Posted by slink on January 5, 2001 1:26:07 am
good stuff. hope to see more of your work on chowk.
shandana
shandana
#6 Posted by semipreciousme on January 5, 2001 2:22:46 am
....ahh, haikus...here the japanese really did get it right....i really liked the last one....
#7 Posted by saminashah on January 5, 2001 1:59:13 pm
Dear Zinnia,
Nice work! Fantasy particularly rocks...
Nice work! Fantasy particularly rocks...
#8 Posted by Ansari on January 5, 2001 1:59:13 pm
Subtle, sensitive and very beautiful. Thank you Zinnia.
Aamir
Aamir
#9 Posted by AAmir on January 5, 2001 1:59:13 pm
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#10 Posted by Snoopy on January 6, 2001 1:12:45 am
#: 7
saminashah
Dear Zinnia,
Nice work! Fantasy particularly rocks...
S
why?
EXPLAIN.
anybody can pretend like you .
saminashah
Dear Zinnia,
Nice work! Fantasy particularly rocks...
S
why?
EXPLAIN.
anybody can pretend like you .
#11 Posted by Molko on January 6, 2001 1:12:45 am
Scout! More `not so profound` poetry!
Nice stuff. Like `Morning` best.
Welcome.
Nice stuff. Like `Morning` best.
Welcome.
#12 Posted by Urstruly on January 6, 2001 3:09:29 am
Dear Zinnia and other poetry lovers:
Plz forgive my uncouth comment but imagine my frustration that I could only understand one out of three Haikus i.e. ``Morning``.
The ``Ripe`` reminds me of a recently shown Madhhuri Dixit movie on Z, titled ``Koyla`` in which she played a village girl in her early teens, with a pot belly and very aggressive breasts.
The ``Fantasy`` makes me queasy, I dont know why?
I must apologize again but that is how I feel most of the time when I read poetry at Chowk. May be I am poetry impaired but then again I understand everything that Zehra Rizvi writes.
Plz forgive my uncouth comment but imagine my frustration that I could only understand one out of three Haikus i.e. ``Morning``.
The ``Ripe`` reminds me of a recently shown Madhhuri Dixit movie on Z, titled ``Koyla`` in which she played a village girl in her early teens, with a pot belly and very aggressive breasts.
The ``Fantasy`` makes me queasy, I dont know why?
I must apologize again but that is how I feel most of the time when I read poetry at Chowk. May be I am poetry impaired but then again I understand everything that Zehra Rizvi writes.
#13 Posted by username on January 6, 2001 5:09:42 am
Urstruly Reply #: 12
wow, good going urstruly. i dont even understand that one! ahhh... everything thing is not for everyone.
wow, good going urstruly. i dont even understand that one! ahhh... everything thing is not for everyone.
#14 Posted by Kiran- on January 6, 2001 3:35:31 pm
Welcome to Chowk Zinnia:
These were well-written; enjoyed ``Morning`` and ``Ripe.`` I think for the next time, maybe you need to add more space between the different pieces, will improve the layout of your works.
Regards,
Kiran
These were well-written; enjoyed ``Morning`` and ``Ripe.`` I think for the next time, maybe you need to add more space between the different pieces, will improve the layout of your works.
Regards,
Kiran
#15 Posted by soysauce on January 6, 2001 3:35:31 pm
Taste
Ocean dressed in red
Dripping on yellow, white and green
Pass that soysauce please
Ocean dressed in red
Dripping on yellow, white and green
Pass that soysauce please
#16 Posted by Kiran- on January 6, 2001 3:35:31 pm
Welcome to Chowk Zinnia:
These were well-written; enjoyed ``Morning`` and ``Ripe.`` I think for the next time, maybe you need to add more space between the different pieces, will improve the layout of your works.
Regards,
Kiran
These were well-written; enjoyed ``Morning`` and ``Ripe.`` I think for the next time, maybe you need to add more space between the different pieces, will improve the layout of your works.
Regards,
Kiran
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