FOB (Fresh Off the Boat)

...the thing i really like about your writing is that it`s always heartfelt...it seems almost tangible at times...

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Sad...reflective...almost considerate.

Ciao

........i don`t care much for poetry shoetry, but this was pretty good ..........maybe it is the godawful cold winter .........

Sprout,
Stop reading poetry....for everyone`s sake.

Aamir-bhai,
Lovely, as usual. Do you publish all this? Pls. tell me it isn`t wasted on us Philistines :)

Dear Aamir,
Your words ring so true..
Sniff..
You are truly amazing
You are an artist of the highest caliber, if only had your artistic expression. I am arranging a private poetry recital , please contact me if you are interested . It would honor my group if you could chair our session...

ashok,

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Aamir

who is not FOB?…

the umbilical chord is the ever sustaining anchor… even when some of us are cloned (if you follow the news;))…and once that is cut…then we come off that boat into this big mother….

perhaps followed by not know was a double whammy…how can that be?

…t

Beautiful.

oi! ye kahaan se aa gayi! it seems chowk has a long memory; and our sins really do catch up with us. . .

:)

aamir

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hey aamir,

i really like your work. this poem in particular, for some reason it reminds me of my mother.

shandana

last time i checked, no one forces anyone to go anywhere.... you do it out of your own will to find new opportunities.