The Children Under the Tree

oye, you`re good. shabaash!

Now this is what I call poetry. Excellent.

aamir

keen eye and good heart!

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Aamir:
Rarely do so many emotions converge so beautifully...fear, sorrow, hope, transience. And then, the movement from the tactile to the sublime, the elemental to the ethereal...

Whatever it is, it is past 1 am here, and I shall take these lines with me to be strong ``before it is dark again``.

...beeyooutiful...

Emotions conveyed beautifully. Good Work ;)

Aamir,
this is your best yet.

Ras

Ansari Sahib

It is soft and delicate and a good respite from the cocophony of dogmas, nationhoods and cultural debates on Chowk.

Aamir this is a good break from the usual political debate thats been flooding this place lately...luvly piece

enjoyed it, Aamir!

Ansari:
``And he was strong,
Before it was dark again.``
These two lines capture the poignancy of the poem. Keep it up!

that was soo pretty!
(had to read it twice but got it in the end :)
loved the ending verse especially..

Very nice, Aamir. Very touching.

aamir...
this is by far one of your best :-) and i hope that there are more bests to come.
~~ana

this is really great
its a very touching poem
the last two verses are exceptionally beautiful...
And he was strong,
Before it was dark again.