Almost Dead

re: temporal

Aaah, I see there are two sobias! I wonder which one temporal was referring to! I`m going to assume it`s me because the other sobiaa has not been published on Chowk, as far as I can see. T, my short story, `A day in the bazaar`, was published about 8 days back on Chowk and is archived in the Leafyglade Inn. I was looking forward to reading your comments/ suggestions, but looks like you didn`t get a chance to read the story!

Arunima, really well-written piece!

//He felt sick, but sad too. He too wanted a slice of this dreary, dull life//

This sentence stuck in mind, in particular. I love the idea behind it.

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hey, this is arunima,
thanks for the welcome and comments, much apprecitated.
rozaiba-yes, me, here, surprise! i think it was you who told me about this place (dont really remember) yea, was a chowk virgin, until recently :)

arunima sengupta? you? here? though i prefer symbolisms to play out in stories more than actual political events, it was nice reading this piece. keep submitting more! :)

arunima:

reiterating brat, welcome to chowk...please keep sharing with us your writings...

...for a change i felt this was short...the character and the story could be developed a little more...


sobia:

about time for a new submission from you?

rgds,

t

Arunima,
An excellent article.. One can feel the pain as if you are part of the story.

``True, he was almost dead, but right now, he was almost living``

You conveyed your point very well. Keep on writing..

Arunima: A Hearty welcome to Chowk. This was a beautiful article. I loved the discussion of emotions and thoughts and the gradual/sudden change. Hope to see more from you - from my childhood city of Delhi.