Let it Be ...

#23 Posted by FouadShah on July 18, 2004 6:04:55 pm

brilliant!

Sometimes, nothing is in your hands. all efforts go in vain. Fate takes its toll on you. What can one do then? Just let it be!

#22 Posted by fiz on May 17, 2004 6:54:27 am

this is sooooooooo good
fiz

#21 Posted by }{)*?@^% on April 25, 2004 7:57:35 am

Really nice and touching as well. But i would say that one should not leave things by saying LET IT BE! In some cases Ignorance is just not a bliss. One should learn to face things and not just leave them because they are there and will be there no matter how much one tried to eliminate them.The trial should still continue!

#20 Posted by Janu on November 16, 2003 3:46:14 pm

Hello Sir,

Sorry for misunderstanding. You`re very welome. Let it be.......HOPE.

sincerely
J

#19 Posted by vega3 on November 14, 2003 12:16:41 pm

Dear all,

Thanks for your supportive comments and healthy criticism of my work. I just let out my vent after a long time and was not expecting such a great response.

#18 Posted by vega3 on November 14, 2003 12:16:40 pm

Dear all,

Thank you for the supportive comments and healthy criticism of my work. I just let out my vent the first time and was not expecting such a great response. Thanks again,

Sirosh

#17 Posted by vega3 on November 14, 2003 11:23:45 am

Sorry, I thought it was my brother. It turns out that I don`t know you. Anyway thanks for appreciating my work.

#16 Posted by vega3 on November 14, 2003 11:23:45 am

Sorry Temporal for not getting back earlier. Yes it makes one wonder why we never get immune to pain and grief. A lot of people told me that time is the best healer and as time went by I found out that they were wrong; time only deepens and worsens the pain. It`s as if you are missing a vital part of your body.

Thanks again for your support.

Sirosh

P.S: I passed on your message.

#15 Posted by Janu on November 14, 2003 7:46:23 am

Hi SIR,

What`s up? I too feel after reading your inspiring poem, I know you. Hope, things have been great and many congratulations for countless success in personal and professional fronts. Just my thoughts on Love and Hate, love seems an irreversible process. It goes in one direction and hate does follow both paths. Sometime unchanged in the course of life and sometime.... Anyway, let not preach hate in this mighty world of status...

Peace and my best wishes (always)
J

PS: Btw, it turned out very true..

abb ke hum bicchrey to khabon mein milain
jaiset sookhay hoey phool kitaboon main milay

#14 Posted by Janu on November 13, 2003 12:37:57 pm

Hello sir-osh,

You`re welcome. Thanks again for wonder-ful words ``let it be``.. Keep it up...

Janu

#13 Posted by vega3 on November 9, 2003 10:58:53 pm

Thanks Janu !

#12 Posted by vega3 on November 9, 2003 10:58:53 pm

Janu,

I feel I know you.

Sirosh

#11 Posted by asaweri on October 30, 2003 4:44:15 am

Dear Sarosh,
Welldone! it was a very nice poem and i realy enjoyed reading it.Nice way of expressing yourself.

#10 Posted by Abee on October 22, 2003 10:32:52 am

great poem Sirosh!

the most wonderful part of poetry is that it helps you express what you feel. nothing is good if it does not touch your own heart ... public opinion is just a formality.

Someone here said that beatles said it better... all my sympathy goes to the foolish mind that thinks poetry of one can be compared to another (let alone the z rated quality of the quoted stanza)

happy writing! and welcome to chowk with one final word of advice... just be yourself and let people see and value that, nothing less should do!

lol

A

#9 Posted by Abee on October 22, 2003 10:32:52 am