The Myth Of Three Words.

i am a sucker for such stuff.
nice... very nice.

This is very nice and soft... but those three words aren`t everything man.

after a good start, I must say: a disappointment.

The prose in the middle of the story reads like ``Jane-Jack`` Book. The idea is to make the reader ``feel`` (undelined-bold-CAPS)

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FEEL, the growing distance between individuals. It started off pretty well and the ending was fair as well. It has to be a ``journey in the experience``

Bilal

P.S. I really enjoyed the last para and the ending lines.

Anish:

…the three words you have alluded to (i love you) are a only a prelude…for the continued calm water sailing of the relationship these three words have to be conjoined with another three...i am sorry…together their judicious usage guarantees smooth sailing…and yes i am sorry for this digression;)

…t

Nice reading Anish, but something doesn`t jell.

Love has many ways of expressing itself and an intelligent girl can easily tell. One can feel it in a look, a caress, a light in the eye, an unconscious smile, etc, etc, etc. In their many meetings, did sneha not figure out Abhaya`s introvert character? Looks like she didn`t. Dimbulb! Tubelight!

Good riddance I say.

cojoined.. which would make it ``i am sorry i love you``
i wonder.......

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