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Broken-Hearts, Dream-Filled eyes

Hamid Mahmood July 2, 2003

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#10 Posted by aquaris on July 3, 2003 8:33:15 am


you told a naked honest truth not only about our country....but about the whole world..

...Its not just in Pakistan..its every where this exploitation of poor....but Rich...and Influentials.....its every where........and has been going on since AGES.....Even the Now enlightened.....Europe ..used Pit children....to extact...Coal from mines....so that their rich could prosper more......its one of the Inherent Injustices....God has Gifted Humanity....there is no escape.....it will go on like this.....some one else...then in his drawing room will again talk about it ...maybe just to kill time...or keep the concesation going.....I do not know your.....reason....but still..

Call me cynic...or whatever...this mere verbosery...won`t help......yes it may touch some sympathtic stings....for some time but then the life will go on...

...but still One should appreciate.....and acknowledge....that atleast.........
...Maybe....


or Maybe not....

their may be a change...




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#9 Posted by septran on July 3, 2003 8:09:43 am
Hamid,
you have high lighted child abuse in a very pathetic way.only senstive person can feel it.the other day i was just buying a pair of shoe for my self,i saw a six year old ,bare foot with dirty clothes entered the shop.I just bought a pair of shoes for him.He could not believe it,twice he pulled my dupatta in excitement``mera hai``
his face was brighten with the very idea of shoes.his heart was filled with awe and reverence.but we always give five, ten rupees and get aside..unfortunately we think all task should be done by government.in fact it``s you and me who has to ceate awareness among the people for egaltarian society.every individual has to pay his role.
over seas people should get to gather to form some organisation with the help of NGO.where they can learn different skills ,so that they may earn their livlihood as well as self respect.one drop of water can make a puddle.
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#8 Posted by nazarhayatkhan on July 3, 2003 7:23:00 am

Hamid

My heart weeps at all what you have said. So true and tragic.

And we are stuck in our stupid egos, ideologies, religious righteousness, territorial claims and so on. (pakistan is spending Rs 160 Billion on defence - and 3 Billion on education)

The mankind is one - the human beings no matter of which origin are the same -

The only stark difference is their quality of life.
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#7 Posted by jay on July 3, 2003 7:22:46 am
Hamid, Amina rasool 5

Your article deserves an exception. I do agree with all you said, the dreamy faces with shattered dreams, and reminds me of my young days when I was a young man with enviable job. There used to be these children, near the shops where I lived in Bangalore and they were there all through the day. I used to buy them expensive baked items, the kinds they are unlikely to taste, and they used to crowd around this mad man., a ritual continued for several years. There was no intention to help them, but only a gesture to acknowledge the oneness, may be a deeper realisation that if the dice of destiny had rolled differently, I could have been one among them. We were poor. So amina, dont thnk of helping, may be no one can help, but there is no harm in giving a token of recognition of the mystery of human existance.
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#6 Posted by soundmeister on July 3, 2003 7:22:45 am
So-----?

Kuch nayaa bolo yaar---your tirade sounds like a fundraising speech delivered to a bunch of fat goraas with charity on their mind----

Hamid Mahmood? think I can say with confidence that it isn`t hamidm :)))
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#5 Posted by aminarasool on July 2, 2003 11:35:08 pm
hello,

A very good description, and i am happy that i came across this writing, it made me think. Every day i see children of all ages walking besides me, but i am so busy chasing the blurred dream that i do not take time out to actually listen to their silent cry. There is so much we can do to help them, but then i am not sure what can be done. You can put them in school but then you will be taking away a bread earner. Their families survive because of them. This is a vicious circle of fate, and though things can be done to improve the situation but there is no one doing the need full. Nevertheless, nice work and please keep on writing on such matters, it is time that they are brought to light and away from the shackles of being called a taboo.
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#4 Posted by temporal on July 2, 2003 3:39:19 pm
Hamid:

...in the canvas you selected (for reasons best known to you) you chose to use only charcoal...it does reflect the grim reality when seen that way...reminded me of pixote and its unacknowledged rip-off salaam bombay

...on the bigger canvas of life there are other colours as well...

rgds,

t

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#3 Posted by sri on July 2, 2003 3:39:19 pm

As Inquirer said, where is the call for action ? The same human tragedy exists in India too. A ten minute drive in Bombay, you will see the worst slums and greatest human tragedy.

Some of us know what we are. We are the great thinkers of our country. We know what we need to do make our people prosperous. We got innovative ideas to start businesses, companies, etc. that provide employment. We know we are not whining little loosers. We got great knowledge on every thing related to economics such as GDP, PPP, etc. We know our country is ruled by some previous generation, thick headed, corrupt politicians. We know previous generation politicians with their stupid heads stuck in their behinds are ruining our country with their corrupt ways, slogans and incitement. We need to wake up. Through sabotage we should hang `em high from the lamp posts. Through clever means, the good people should grab the seats of power that make policy decisions. Every honest young man should aim to become a local MLA ( member of legislative assembly ) or MP ( of parliament ). Only then we can BEGIN to change our country.

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#2 Posted by moulabux on July 2, 2003 2:20:39 pm
Reminds of this one dialogue of Liar Liar, where an ecstatic Jim Carrey hands all the green bucks he had to a beggar, and says something like, ``You can have all my money, but it won`t keep you happy.`` Sad but true.

Cheers.
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#1 Posted by Inquirer on July 2, 2003 12:34:41 pm
You have written a ghastly description. Your statement is sadly deficient because you invoke no action. All over the world the poor are exploited. But there is need here to propound something! There has to be a rallying position otherwise yours is just a shiek in dark wilderness.
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