Reality?

Alia R Khan October 13, 2003

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#5 Posted by tazy on October 22, 2003 7:13:16 am

read it and read...sounds nice.if only i could understand the what the poet was trying to say..wouldn`t mind if some one care to explain..

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#4 Posted by Malyck on October 17, 2003 1:03:54 pm

I read it four times ... not even a single word I can understand...I know I am too dumb for poetry.... sorry for it .... wish Freud should never read these words... rescue from tongue ... million ripples ... sugar lips....wet windows. Becuz Freud has a mind of his own.

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#3 Posted by temporal on October 16, 2003 12:43:30 pm

Alia:

welcome and keep writing...and pls. do not be discouraged by the number of interactions...they only tell you one side of the story:)...

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#2 Posted by the_underdog on October 14, 2003 8:35:53 am

pretty good i must say! i kinda like it!