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Acidity - Novellete Part III (final)

Nadeem F Paracha October 31, 2003

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#17 Posted by trashman on November 5, 2003 10:56:17 am
#14 by vicegerent on November 5, 2003 10:14am PT
May God have mercy on NFP. I belive he needs help. Instead of thinking of him as genius or mad , what we need to do is try to help him out of this situation. Lets all pray for him.


A true NGO (now that`s what you are, right?). Think about your own situation, buddy. According to your member profile u claim to have worked for an American NGO in Kabul. What were you distributing? Levis jeans (for the crippled), Big Macs (for the hungery) and Swiss chocolate (for the bitter)? Thus, why don`t you help ALL of us out, brother vicegerent.
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#18 Posted by PunjabiZulu on November 5, 2003 10:56:17 am

Correction to post No.15

``the person that writes an 18th century Victorian novel in the present day.``

should of course read....``19th century Victorian novel``...


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#19 Posted by riffat on November 5, 2003 10:56:29 am
Opinions, all opinions, Zula. And why are you the one asking the questions when you just refused to answer my initial qustion:?Le me repeat it again: Tell me if you can, what do you think Acidity was all about (WITHOUT using the many adjectives u have already used)?
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#20 Posted by SuzieLightning on November 5, 2003 2:25:49 pm
NFP -

I respect you for rising above these brothers here and remaining mute while they bring in the scale and measure your intellect in cups and ounces and pints.

I think you`re a rockstar. This is good stuff. Better than reviewing odd Tulsi songs if nothing else. This stuff is so mindbending that the first time I read it, I was coughing myself into fits. Then it gave me a headache. Later I realized that getting a pounding headache from something like Acidity is far better than getting one from a cheap, short-lived acid substitute e.g. glue. Your work is both saintly and perverse and that, I think is rare.

Cheers.
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#21 Posted by PunjabiZulu on November 5, 2003 3:43:21 pm

riffat
It is about the writer`s attempt to utilise a sub-standard writer`s methodolgy to juxtapose random images to impress easily impressed people with pretentious, posturing prose.
These people are easily impressed by derivative writing as long as it is dressed up as ``post modern cut up method``.
In tribute to you i shall now post my review of this Novellette using the post-modern cut up method.

......................................................................................
Zionist nymphomaniacs sh1t on an Arab boys face. Beardo says NikeJihad: Just Do It.
Coca-Cola is the stretch marks of Neo Con slave trade. A Hindu masturbates in the spoon of Pindi. The brahmin p1sses on a shudras face.
We are the Chosen Bees says the Rabbi.
I am the wood pills, i twat in your come, says the Mullah.
...
...
...............................................................................

Please call me a rock star too, SuzieLightning
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#22 Posted by SuzieLightning on November 5, 2003 5:14:31 pm
PunjabiZulu, you are a rockstar.
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#23 Posted by CoolHandLuke on November 6, 2003 6:55:09 am
PZ, you may be a rock star, but you`re certainly NOT a writer. Cap it, already.
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#24 Posted by riffat on November 6, 2003 6:55:09 am
#21 by PunjabiZulu on November 5, 2003 3:43pm PT
In tribute to you i shall now post my review of this Novellette using the post-modern cut up method. Zionist nymphomaniacs sh1t on an Arab boys face. Beardo says NikeJihad: Just Do It.
Coca-Cola is the stretch marks of Neo Con slave trade. A Hindu masturbates in the spoon of Pindi. The brahmin p1sses on a shudras face.
We are the Chosen Bees says the Rabbi.
I am the wood pills, i twat in your come, says the Mullah.


That was AWFUL, PZ. No wonder you didn`t like (nor understand) Acidity. A true rock star (read bozo).
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#25 Posted by PunjabiZulu on November 6, 2003 6:55:10 am

See how easily you are impressed, SuzieLightning?

I must be a genius.

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#26 Posted by PunjabiZulu on November 6, 2003 7:35:44 am

riffat

It was a pastiche of the pompous meaningless trash that causes you to squeal praise at the inferior meanderings of a derivative, “post-modern-cut-up-method” writer *grin*, who derives his “methodology” from a writer of miniscule significance to begin with.

The disciple and advocate of such a writer of posturing junk is……*insert word here, using post-modern-cut-up method if you so wish*

CoolHandLuke

See above.


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#27 Posted by SuzieLightning on November 6, 2003 7:35:44 am
Aw! Rocks stars are cool people!
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#28 Posted by nvp2003 on November 6, 2003 11:08:47 am
#25 by PunjabiZulu on November 6, 2003 6:55am PT

See how easily you are impressed, SuzieLightning?
I must be a genius.




Gee, now look who`s getting all deluded!
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#29 Posted by riffat on November 6, 2003 11:09:03 am
PZ, you`re such a genius.
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#30 Posted by SuzieLightning on November 6, 2003 1:35:21 pm
NFP -

Killer silence that is.
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#31 Posted by PunjabiZulu on November 7, 2003 6:25:51 am

nvp2003

Here are some examples of delusions, from the gems below...

``I think you`re a rockstar. This is good stuff...Your work is both saintly and perverse and that, I think is rare...some people think NFP is genius...Acidity is a very important work... it shouts and screams and cuts at what is thought of as unspeakable....``

SuzieLightning

Maybe he is busy cutting some things up...



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#32 Posted by nvp2003 on November 7, 2003 6:25:52 am
Lost cause, SuzieLightening. The man hardly replys. The only time he did something to this extent was on Acidity Pt:II. Anyway, why need NFP, when we have geniuses/rock stars like PunjabyZidee, I mean, PujabyZulu?
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    #27 SuzieLightning
    #26 PunjabiZulu
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