Fatima Husain March 6, 2004
#10 Posted by feedback on March 7, 2004 11:37:19 am
This is all quite wonderful, really. Thank you Fatima.
#9 Posted by cipram on March 7, 2004 7:38:39 am
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#7 Posted by Urstruly on March 7, 2004 6:50:59 am
memory is a good poem but I think last line need some rephrasing - it makes it confusing whether the mother forgot her pains or her the morning-next pill.
All other poems are excellent.
All other poems are excellent.
#6 Posted by dee on March 7, 2004 1:00:26 am
Dear Fatima,
Very well written poems. I drifted to another plain altogether. Do keep writing!
Regards,
Dee
Very well written poems. I drifted to another plain altogether. Do keep writing!
Regards,
Dee
#5 Posted by temporal on March 6, 2004 4:25:44 pm
Fatima:
welcome to chowk!...nice poems...hope you keep contributing here:)
hamidm:
...we knew behind all that false bravado and non-chalant verbiage beats a heart ever so softly...)
here is another one you would understand:
said mrs hamidm
why cannot you be nice
to temporal always
pouring the single malt
‘hah!’ said mr hamid
now you can progress to Easy Answer
welcome to chowk!...nice poems...hope you keep contributing here:)
hamidm:
...we knew behind all that false bravado and non-chalant verbiage beats a heart ever so softly...)
here is another one you would understand:
said mrs hamidm
why cannot you be nice
to temporal always
pouring the single malt
‘hah!’ said mr hamid
now you can progress to Easy Answer
#4 Posted by Lord_Dirtier on March 6, 2004 12:30:40 pm
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#3 Posted by hamidm2 on March 6, 2004 7:13:51 am
............ i hate to admit this and hope temporal is not listening, but i did like this ....... maybe, all poetry is not bad ........
#2 Posted by Saminasha on March 6, 2004 5:06:59 am
Excellent sense of restraint, clean simple language, narratives that move and leap-well done, Fatima!
Please contact me at Saminasha@earthlink.net
Please contact me at Saminasha@earthlink.net
#1 Posted by shandana on March 6, 2004 12:35:45 am
moving. made me sad. i will hold my child closer today.
peace...
peace...
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