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Memory and other Poems

Fatima Husain March 6, 2004

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#10 Posted by feedback on March 7, 2004 11:37:19 am
This is all quite wonderful, really. Thank you Fatima.
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#9 Posted by cipram on March 7, 2004 7:38:39 am
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#8 Posted by Sobia on March 7, 2004 7:38:27 am
moving..
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#7 Posted by Urstruly on March 7, 2004 6:50:59 am
memory is a good poem but I think last line need some rephrasing - it makes it confusing whether the mother forgot her pains or her the morning-next pill.

All other poems are excellent.


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#6 Posted by dee on March 7, 2004 1:00:26 am
Dear Fatima,

Very well written poems. I drifted to another plain altogether. Do keep writing!

Regards,

Dee


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#5 Posted by temporal on March 6, 2004 4:25:44 pm
Fatima:
welcome to chowk!...nice poems...hope you keep contributing here:)

hamidm:
...we knew behind all that false bravado and non-chalant verbiage beats a heart ever so softly...)

here is another one you would understand:

said mrs hamidm
why cannot you be nice
to temporal always

pouring the single malt
‘hah!’ said mr hamid


now you can progress to Easy Answer

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#4 Posted by Lord_Dirtier on March 6, 2004 12:30:40 pm
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#3 Posted by hamidm2 on March 6, 2004 7:13:51 am
............ i hate to admit this and hope temporal is not listening, but i did like this ....... maybe, all poetry is not bad ........
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#2 Posted by Saminasha on March 6, 2004 5:06:59 am
Excellent sense of restraint, clean simple language, narratives that move and leap-well done, Fatima!

Please contact me at Saminasha@earthlink.net
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#1 Posted by shandana on March 6, 2004 12:35:45 am
moving. made me sad. i will hold my child closer today.

peace...
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