Memory and other Poems

This is all quite wonderful, really. Thank you Fatima.

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moving..

memory is a good poem but I think last line need some rephrasing - it makes it confusing whether the mother forgot her pains or her the morning-next pill.

All other poems are excellent.

Dear Fatima,

Very well written poems. I drifted to another plain altogether. Do keep writing!

Regards,

Dee

Fatima:
welcome to chowk!...nice poems...hope you keep contributing here:)

hamidm:
...we knew behind all that false bravado and non-chalant verbiage beats a heart ever so softly...)

here is another one you would understand:

said mrs hamidm
why cannot you be nice
to temporal always

pouring the single malt
‘hah!’ said mr hamid

now you can progress to Easy Answer

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............ i hate to admit this and hope temporal is not listening, but i did like this ....... maybe, all poetry is not bad ........

Excellent sense of restraint, clean simple language, narratives that move and leap-well done, Fatima!

Please contact me at Saminasha@earthlink.net

moving. made me sad. i will hold my child closer today.

peace...