Half a Night

Since when did writing and expressing become politically or intellectually correct/ incorrect?
Words, phrases, catchy or not, fitting into thoughts or thoughts fitting into them, doesnt really matter, as long as you end up saying something well enough and the reader associating with it somehow. No creative idea or thought is wrong...ever...it just has its suitability.

It’s requiem for spring smiles
as she gathers autumn leaves

It is so beautifully said, i feel , it leaves no room for me to ask the poetess to rephrase it. it might not be a great peice of work, but where ever it stands...it has its place.