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When Abu Died

Sheela Jaywant September 14, 2004

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#9 Posted by Maliha on August 10, 2005 1:53:52 am
Thankyou for sharing...
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#8 Posted by sheilabuzz_dee on September 22, 2004 1:36:22 am
Hi Sheela,
A well written article with a powerful message. This short story deserves to go into print in magazines with international and national circulation.
Sheila & Buzz.
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#7 Posted by fats on September 18, 2004 10:50:05 pm


Keep up the good work, Sheela. Abu reminds all of us to promptly and unambiguously will our spare parts to those who need them. It is too hard a decision for a devastated survivor to make when a dear one dies suddenly.
Fatima
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#6 Posted by scott on September 18, 2004 9:18:34 am
Had to wipe the tears in my eyes.
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#5 Posted by syke on September 16, 2004 8:46:15 am
i think your article touched on a very important subject..the hesitation which families feel in donating organs is a glaring issue..which mostly leads to families backing down from performing this herioc deed...
great read..thankyou for sharing a traumatic experience with us.
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#4 Posted by veeresh on September 15, 2004 10:14:04 pm
Very well written, thank you.
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#3 Posted by jayraj1 on September 15, 2004 10:05:23 am
Sheela.

Heartfelt. Please keep it up.

It truely is a dialema when you need to decide such things.

Jayraj1

PS :

And Samankhan is right. You handled it so well, no one will dispute.

Unfortunately all most no one will act too. Can tell you from my own experience. I balked. Trauma was too much. So much for my manhood huh?



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#2 Posted by Jibbe on September 15, 2004 12:48:40 am
Long....but nice. I like the way you created the conflict and how the arguments revolved around organ donation - which is a topic most people in the subcontinent are heistant off!
Anyway, good job.
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#1 Posted by samankhan on September 15, 2004 12:06:44 am
Ms. Sheela Jaywant,
Though the narration was a bit lenghty, you have captured the feelilngs, emotions and anxiety in a simple and lucid style. And thankyou for bringing out the religious dilemma so naturally, without any bias, and more importantly, without taking potshots at religion.
Regards,
SK.
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