Servility
F M October 1, 2004
#1 Posted by Urstruly on October 1, 2004 11:49:53 am
samajh nahin aiee. I guess I have to wait for our resident professor of literary genre to shed light on its ins and outs.
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#2 Posted by Maria526 on October 1, 2004 1:28:25 pm
Beautifully written.. feelings expressed very vividly.
I rather enjoy the openess of the ending.. let the reader think what he/she wants:)
I rather enjoy the openess of the ending.. let the reader think what he/she wants:)
#3 Posted by amit on October 1, 2004 2:45:56 pm
Re:#1
yaar, this is just a snippet of a romance novel...the Mills and Boon stuff that women crave for some mysterious reasons....
yaar, this is just a snippet of a romance novel...the Mills and Boon stuff that women crave for some mysterious reasons....
#5 Posted by fara on October 2, 2004 7:50:46 am
amit: you`ve missed the point completely by your mention of `mills `n` boons`.
maria256, martini: thankyou for your apreciation.
maria256, martini: thankyou for your apreciation.
#6 Posted by Garam_Chai on October 2, 2004 9:58:32 pm
F M
You wrote it beautifully. I have been to similar situation, although the beauty transformed into different shapes. It is fascinating that i find beauty in so many different places. What looked ugly in past, seems beautiful now. Sometimes, i enjoy sitting on the bench at the bus stop aimlessly, and missing my bus. Just watching people around you at the Punjab University old campus bus stop is also very enjoyable, when i go back there. Gazing at people who are full of hopes, dreams and romance.
Regards.
You wrote it beautifully. I have been to similar situation, although the beauty transformed into different shapes. It is fascinating that i find beauty in so many different places. What looked ugly in past, seems beautiful now. Sometimes, i enjoy sitting on the bench at the bus stop aimlessly, and missing my bus. Just watching people around you at the Punjab University old campus bus stop is also very enjoyable, when i go back there. Gazing at people who are full of hopes, dreams and romance.
Regards.
#7 Posted by temporal on October 4, 2004 10:56:05 am
fara:
calls for an encore?
..am remninded of a beggarwoman at a wayside station...
memories!
lve
t
calls for an encore?
..am remninded of a beggarwoman at a wayside station...
memories!
lve
t
#8 Posted by ELUSIVE on October 5, 2004 1:06:38 pm
Short but effective! It was a pleasure reading this short story. Beauty is inexplicable and is found in various forms, and perhaps that is the very ``beauty`` of it. :) However, some things are unique and ant attempt to touch or tarnish them is an insult to the former.
It was a nice read. It reminded me of a music video i saw a long time back of the song, ``Nothing at All`` by Ronan Kieting which focuses on a building of a friendship/ relationship amongst two strangers sitting on a bench. :)
Keep writing!
It was a nice read. It reminded me of a music video i saw a long time back of the song, ``Nothing at All`` by Ronan Kieting which focuses on a building of a friendship/ relationship amongst two strangers sitting on a bench. :)
Keep writing!
#9 Posted by epiphany on October 9, 2004 8:55:43 pm
FM,
The supreme form of love is to surrender oneself wholly, without reservation, without pride to the will of that which is loved.
More often than not when love is discussed or felt it is hard to create a division between man`s love for a woman and a human`s love for God. For passion in its various forms is exuberantly ecstatically felt. And this is also that instance when one faces extreme difficulty knowing where reverence ends and divinity begins.
Peace!
The supreme form of love is to surrender oneself wholly, without reservation, without pride to the will of that which is loved.
More often than not when love is discussed or felt it is hard to create a division between man`s love for a woman and a human`s love for God. For passion in its various forms is exuberantly ecstatically felt. And this is also that instance when one faces extreme difficulty knowing where reverence ends and divinity begins.
Peace!
#10 Posted by sazvision on April 22, 2006 12:22:18 pm
It was very well written,short but thought provoking.I enjoyed the way you have
inter-woven words with picturesque beauty of the passage.Way of unleashing beloveds beauty is commentable.No wonder it can only be felt by those who have experienced this emotion called love.your description of deity`s(beloved`s)authority and of desciples(lover) sense of nothingness infront of beloveds presence is inexplicable.
Looking forward to see more stuff from you
inter-woven words with picturesque beauty of the passage.Way of unleashing beloveds beauty is commentable.No wonder it can only be felt by those who have experienced this emotion called love.your description of deity`s(beloved`s)authority and of desciples(lover) sense of nothingness infront of beloveds presence is inexplicable.
Looking forward to see more stuff from you
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