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Two Poems: Attention Please and Say What?

Fakhra Hassan April 29, 2005

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#9 Posted by noetherf on April 29, 2005 9:15:02 pm
Re: # 6

Hain?
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#8 Posted by noetherf on April 29, 2005 9:12:51 pm
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Saminasha, it is indeed ironic to know some people just don`t understand the essence of the veil

Thank you very much :)
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#7 Posted by chowkstaff on April 29, 2005 1:23:26 pm
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Please use editors@chowk.com to send corrections after an article is posted.
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#6 Posted by temporal on April 29, 2005 12:57:24 pm
fakhra:

first you churn out the irony in the prose poem....then....you go for the jugular...

``Man is perfect``, undoubtedly, sir.
The phrase looks good in the museum
where people go
to see
to learn from the language of history
and history
speaks for itself.

...you are a devi(l) ms. hassan;)

lve

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#5 Posted by Saj1981 on April 29, 2005 12:53:35 pm
Very interesting poem....the realisation that a garment meant to ward of all possible ``attraction`` ends in its very nature attracting all of it in most global societies...shows the conundrum facing its backers.
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#4 Posted by noetherf on April 29, 2005 12:39:10 pm
Correction in the footnote:

Hypatia (Egypt, 370-415 A.D.) not B.C.
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#3 Posted by chowkstaff on April 29, 2005 12:14:45 pm
Re: # 1

Corrected in the original.
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#2 Posted by Saminasha on April 29, 2005 11:08:15 am
Really interesting!

I loved the reconceptualization of the burqa as a ninja outfit as well as the other ironies. Smart narrative voice.
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#1 Posted by noetherf on April 29, 2005 10:32:24 am
``Her photo is going to be taken
like everyone else but she could tell
that everyone now
was paying full attention
as the sheets are drawn to form a
cubicle around the photo stand
and she sits there to reveal her
face, finally``

The highlighted word is missing in the poem, thought you should know.
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